Reviews for Beautiful Doll
actlikesummer chapter 2 . 11/21/2011
I know you haven't updated this in a while but please add another chapter soon! I love this story so far. I love how sweet jasper is with Alice. Please continue this!
CrazyCountryLove3 chapter 2 . 6/17/2011
you really should keep writing this. i really like i t
XxNonstoppSmilerxX chapter 2 . 6/14/2011
They're gonna be good parents! Just gotta work really hard! Did you pick baby names yet?
XxNonstoppSmilerxX chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
Poor guys :( I feel for them. Especially Alice's mom. Going through that, and knowing her daughter made the same mistake she did? :(
deltagirl74 chapter 2 . 5/11/2011
I kinda wished we could get into Jasper's head when he talked with his parents about the baby. He seems to want the baby but don't really know what he is thinking and Alice is pinning her hopes on him not desserting her.
niamh89 chapter 2 . 5/11/2011
i hope they don't give up the baby. Are Jaspers parents esme and carlisle or someone else?
elizi02 chapter 2 . 5/11/2011
Aww... poor Jasper and Alice. I mean, come on, 16?
niamh89 chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
i really liked it! :P pleaese update its like my favourite story ever. :]
emsBlock chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
this is goood pleease next soon! :D
deltagirl74 chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
Alice's mother seems to be making things worse for them already.