Reviews for Hideous Cygnus
melanieintn chapter 2 . 5/4/2011
LOL, for her presentation...my, my

Don't like how Bella is being treated though, Thanks for the review!
JealousOrchardx chapter 5 . 5/4/2011
I think I'm becoming obsessed with your stories, you're an amazing writer and all your stories are incredible! :D
Montara chapter 4 . 5/4/2011
I don't get it...he likes her like a sister and is trying to protect her just because he doesn't like how she's treated or he likes her like a potential lover?

I mean, he can be outrage for the way those kids treated her but that doesn't mean he likes her...
melanieintn chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
LOL, Cute!
baybay's mommy chapter 4 . 5/4/2011
i cant wait to see where this goes
avidreader69 chapter 4 . 5/4/2011
I love that he threatened Charlie for not doing his job of protecting Bella from the Creeps. Lauren is just plain ignorant and stupid for saying that in the first place, but to say it in front of her FATHER? That one needs a beat down. Nice job Esme picking a nice girl for Edward(Lauren, really?). Bella's presentation and obliviousness to Edward helping her and the fact that she was touching him inappropriately-A RIOT!
puasluoma chapter 4 . 5/4/2011
Love it!

Update!
Pianogirl05 chapter 4 . 5/4/2011
Good chapter!
Pianogirl05 chapter 3 . 5/4/2011
Go Edward!
Pianogirl05 chapter 2 . 5/4/2011
The rabbit presentation was hilarious!
Canada1995 chapter 4 . 5/4/2011
love it
Pianogirl05 chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
Can't wait to see how this story goes! This is definitely a different Bella than we are used to seeing.
mariposa525 chapter 4 . 5/4/2011
I'm addicted to this story already :)
avidreader69 chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
The poor girl. She has so much personality waiting to burst out like that zit.
darkangel0212 chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
keep up the good work on your story
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