Reviews for Hideous Cygnus
jess 'twilight matrix chapter 9 . 5/8/2011
I really hope she doesn't have to cancel her date with Edward. But something tells me he wont stand for it. Ha ha. Update as soon as you can!
Daddys little crazy bitch chapter 9 . 5/8/2011
love it

ThroughTheAshes chapter 9 . 5/8/2011
I don't think that Alice would mind if she found out that they were going to a second hand shop to buy a dress. She already knew that they don't have a lot of money. Really good update soon! :)
emeraldstarforever chapter 9 . 5/8/2011


squidbert chapter 9 . 5/7/2011
Hmm, 25k sucks in the city, but its not too bad in a small town if you dont have a mortgage. And usually in most FF's Charlie inherited his house.

Good chappy! Really enjoying the story.
Rayjo chapter 9 . 5/7/2011
awwwww alice is adorable
The Real Victoria Maundrell chapter 9 . 5/7/2011
I am totally loving this story. High five!
Pianogirl05 chapter 9 . 5/7/2011
I feel so bad for Bella.
TwiAggie94 chapter 9 . 5/7/2011
Awe. Poor Alice she did not get to go shopping. Can't wait for more Bella Edward time.
RomieForever chapter 9 . 5/7/2011
ahhh more pretttyy pleaseeeeee
hotmama4jd chapter 9 . 5/7/2011
You are right on with the cop-money issue. My parents live in a small midwestern town and there are a two cops on the force who actually qualify for foodstamps b/c they make so little and have more than one kid. Seriously. Sucks balls.
SleepMyBella chapter 9 . 5/7/2011
I love your story! I can't wait to read more!
Edward's Baby Bella chapter 9 . 5/7/2011
poor bella will never be the same once alice gets a hold of her and it will be pretty soon lol. love it. i just wish the chapters were a little longer *pouts*
avidreader69 chapter 9 . 5/7/2011
Is Renee not able to find local work? I feel bad for Bella. It is hard but can be a great character builder. It is much harder to accept charity than most people realize. I keep dwelling on Emmett's comment about her being ungrateful for Edward's help and attention, like some kind of dog who should be grateful for the scraps thrown to her. She is treated less than human at that school.
Melany333 chapter 9 . 5/7/2011
love it
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