This is not half bad I would suggest a to maybe ummm work on the doctors character more

Lovely. Absolutely lovely. I love that bit about River falling in love with the man that he is. Watch your punctuation and tenses though :)

Fluff at its best. :D

Oh goodness my heart is in a little tizzy just like The Doctor's ;-) My cheeks are a bit red after reading those last couple of paragraphs, that's for sure /

Very well written indeed, this has definitely sparked some inspiration for some drawings C-;

Awww, aww, awwwwwww! Okay. Sorry. Not the most wonderfully written review of all time I'm going to admit but your story really made me go all gooey and mushy inside in the best kind of way. Brilliant :D