|Reviews for Would it be fair?|
| Saori chapter 5 . 1/22
i'm from germany, so please excuse my mistakes if i did some. I really like your story, please hurry up with going on.
When isaw this ff the first time i just thought "oh no, it's in english" but it sounded so interesting that i thought :wanne read it all :3. Well, you know, i'm in grate 7 and i didn't understand everything but i'm very excited about the yaoi-part which will coming as soon as it's possible i hope ! :)
Very good job
| Zubby-KUN chapter 12 . 9/28/2013
I love it! Please update!
| MadaSasu chapter 12 . 9/12/2013
More more more more more more more more more more more more! I read this during math class being evil like I am. And I was epppppp! 3 love uuu
| sonia8378 chapter 11 . 9/3/2013
Oh em ge ! This story is one of the most amazing stories ive ever read T.T im really glad i found it . It makes me happy u.u ur'e a very good writer okai :') i just hope u'll keep making chapters and not finish it , i really love it and like reading it x3
| MadaSasu chapter 11 . 9/2/2013
YOU CUT IT OFF RIGHT THEREEEEE HOW COULD YOU GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH ehpgiwedroihwperoherineo;rgebrgi;hlg *Dies*
WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE MOREEEE NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWWWWWWW!
| HurtxxMangekyou chapter 11 . 9/1/2013
Yaaaaaaaay, they will talk!
Hoping for a fast update
| Remiaa chapter 11 . 9/1/2013
I am SO HAPPY you are updating this story! I found your story 3 months ago and the cliffhanger made my hashimada feels go into overload. now I don't have to wonder anymore I get to know pls update again soon! :D
| MadaSasu chapter 10 . 8/31/2013
I absolutely love this. It is wonderful, awesome, and FREAKIN .WG update nOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW T_T i SPAMMED YOU ONTO MY ALERT LIST LIKE 15 TIMES HAPPILY NOW MUSHHH WRITE FASTER NOWWWWZZ
| narutosuck chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
oh yell i can't wait till you get to the part where hashirama is fucking madara in the ass till shit comes out
| AmegakureAngel chapter 10 . 8/24/2013
Can't wait for more
Gosh DARNIT when are those beautiful two going to get along . I wanna see the soft sides xD
| jseadreamer chapter 10 . 8/24/2013
asdfghjkl; Holy crap, you updated! When I checked my email and saw that you had posted a new chapter, I came immediately to check it out. I was definitely not disappointed.
I really like how this chapter played out. It focused a lot on Madara's feelings which I really liked. I'm wondering what's going to happen next chapter now that they're actually talking again.
Again, I'm just really glad to see you're writing again. You have no idea how much I love this story and seeing a new chapter being posted just totally made me day. I'm looking forward to reviewing every time you update. Thanks so much for not giving up on this story because it is really good and has a lot of potential. Goodbye for now. :)
| HurtxxMangekyou chapter 10 . 8/24/2013
Hashirama and Madara are such a mess right now haha hope they sort things out
With your chapter could you take more paragraphs, i cant read big chunks of writing. Take a paragraph for a conversation or a new event. Having it in big chunks makes it too hard to read
Thanks for the chapter!
| lexuelexie chapter 9 . 8/19/2013
| jseadreamer chapter 9 . 8/15/2013
Will you be writing any more of this story? I REALLY love it and just wanted to let you know how much it means to me. :)
| Guest chapter 8 . 11/5/2012
WRITE WRITE WRITE! XD \(/)\