|Reviews for Tao of the Machine|
| htek39 chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
Good start to your story, provide more depth, flesh out your protagonists more. Only a couple of little editing issues, grammar and sentence structure, but a strong start. Keep up the good work, I look forward to more additions to the story.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Nice one, however you could have spent some more time on describing more of the teams members, wich metatype they are and so on. Also that shady bar could use some more description, in my opinion. But other than that, a good story!