Reviews for Atlantis Made Them Do It
thewolf74 chapter 11 . 7/5/2013
This was a very good. I always thought that John would make a great farther. This was a very good story. I really enjoyed it.
Forahr chapter 11 . 6/13/2011
I just have to come out of lurkdom to tell you how much I've enjoyed this story. You're take on John and Sam is so right on! You were able to make me see what they were seeing, thinking what they were thinking, and most intoxicating, feeling what they were feeling-all throughout this entire story! I feel this is a 'pairing' that has been so neglected They are so good together. More please?
sheppardlover928 chapter 11 . 5/24/2011
Excellent story! I have to say I was alittle freaked out about the threesome episode with John kissing Rodney and then John watching Rodney and was creepy and so out of character for all of them. But then when you explain Atlantis being involved in the whole "affair" made sense. Atlantis would aparently do well in the porn movie genre!LOL!

Since I love anything John-I was so happy you made him so supportive and affectionate and well-perfect! :) You also kept Rodney true and their relationships melded quite nicley. I love that John and Sam are in love.

I thought everyone took the fact that Atlantis was sentient a bit too casually. I would think this would be a monumental find but then it was cool when she let her feelings known.

Sure hope you write more stories of Luke and Grace growing up! Awesome story-thanks for sharing it!
Sailor's Wife chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
Eh, no one really has to like it. It's all in fun and was never meant to be within charecter anyway.

Just a story and a way to relax. Besides, wanted to write something there wasn't already a million versions of, something different.

However, not all my fics will be like that so hopefully it will not discourage you from reading others written by me.

I have read every book by my favorite author, yet, there is one book I detest and an entire series I really don't care for, but that doesn't make me love his other works any less and will read anything he puts out there.

However, there were also plenty of warnings as to what this fic was about including threesome action (sleeping with more than one person was a given). So the distaste for this fic doesn't bother me.

Aiya chapter 8 . 5/17/2011
Congratulations, you just made Sam to be like a whore, having sex with two different men the same night, getting her pregnant and the most ridiculous thing is that her twins have different fathers, you're soooo funny, it's sad you make this because I think your writing is very good, but the plot of this fic is very unbelivable. I love Sam/John but your Sam/John are not them.
CrystalKenobi chapter 5 . 5/9/2011
ch 5

I loved the banter between SG1 in their bringing Sam up to date on the goings ons. The how many times who has been married was a nice touch. And Vala I knew you would use her to get things out of Sam Vala has a way of doing that. In many ways Vala has become the friend that has been missing from Sam's life since Janet. So I was glad when they brought her into the show. And her talking about sheppard or Lorne that was good because she had Sam in a panic there. So the girl talk was right on target. I think Vala already knew that Sam was going to be pregnant having been there herself. Of course with all the things that has been done to Sam's body and the chances of her ever having one makes this story a very nice one. Coffee making her sick. Poor Sam the scientist. Coffee is the backbone. lol

Oh poor sam can you imagine what must have been going on thru her mind. who is the father. And we know that there is only one birth control that is 100% proof and its not medicine. unless you factor in Asgards, strange alien devices, furlings, ancients etc . Well then at that point there is no such thing as 100% proof. lol

The the telling of her teamates and their reactions espeically cam's and daniels was priceless. And of course carter saying twins at teh end was just perfect.
CrystalKenobi chapter 4 . 5/9/2011
CH4 I skimmed over ch 2 because well threesome isn't my kind of thing, so just enough to find them spinning the bottle and then knowing what was coming left from there and went to the next chapter I do admit that after reading the 1st paragraph of ch3 I had to go back to read the the last sentence of 2. I might suggest that you may want to put up that sentence right before start of ch 3 for those who don't read ch 2 enough or complety to know why john was complaining at the beginning. Sort of like "a last time on". I saw where John and Sam where the main pairing and that there was look like a little of sam and rodney in it to make me curious to see how sam would choose between the two. I'm a John/sam fan who was converted from Jack and Sam a couple years ago by Lone-ranger. I also like how you covered the Elizabeth being hurt and how Sam did just come to runn things for a while why waiting on Elizabeth and they became friends and everyone didn't just kick sam off as soon as eliabeth came back.

chp 3 I thought you handled it well. Not any more explicit then some Hariqum romance books depending on which brand or series of course, maybe a little more than I would have liked but its not easy for some people to get the indepth feelings of the act in few words or with out detail (as you can see I'm not much good at explaining what I'm trying to say myself.) but over all it was good. I liked that you wanted to show that John really does care a lot about sam and that she cares about him even if its not love at this point yet.

ch 4 I like that you have John and Sam talking with each other some before she has to leave so that we see that they care for each other and have an understanding that why they do life isn't ready to let them be together so maybe they were just suppose to be that one time. Then I like that she goes and sees Rodney and that what he says was actualy right on target for him in how he has grown as a person and that he understands that why it would never happen again etc. I thought the sailers bag was a nice touch and you are right you can pack a lot of stuff into one of those things. I also like her homecoming with SG1 Vala was right on target in her characterzation.
madwhiskey chapter 9 . 5/7/2011
I can't believe only one other person has reviewed this! It's awesome.

I kinda was hoping that both babies would be John's, but if one had to be Rodney's, I'm glad it was the little girl. This way when she grows up, she won't have the receding hairline to worry about. Also, I think she will be able to wrap Rodney around her little finger so easily.

Since it seems John and Sam are going to be together, I'm wondering if Rodney may end up being a little resentful of John as he will be able to spend more time with the little girl especially at night. I guess I'll have to wait and see. Update soon please!
cassia999 chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
Love your story! Hope there will be more of John/Sam!