Just a comment: it was not the Spanish inquisition the one to burnt witches (there were few cases of burnt people in Spain, Portugal and Italy (almost 500 in 4 centuries). Next were the Baltic with Finland, Sweden and Norway with 775 cases with Denamark with 1,000 executions, in Britain were almost 2,500 executions (there were none in Ireland). Meanwhile in the Holy Germanic Roman Empire there were at least 20,000 and in Switzerland more than 10,000 and France 4,000.
The inquisiion didn't burned witches, they were looking for heretics and was a control tool

well this is pretty bad ... no sorry this is really bad , it feels like all chapters are a summary of an chapter and ur just pointing out the highlights of the chapter it feels like it is written very basic " no meat on the bones" harry is just fucking weird ... goes from being well harry to being a loyal soldier for some reason lol then his fixation on obliviate people when they see him sue magic lol i mean he could change so drastic from being just normal harry to a loyal soldier to someone he dont know at all just because they treated him well ? but he cant change his way of thinking with him using magic infront of people sigh thats just small problems tho but there are so many small once that they become super big togheter the summary feeling all the chapters gives off there is no real depth to the chapters that makes u want to sink ur fangs into next chapter like i said b4 it feels very basic and forced

Great story.

When he salutes the men who is holding him prisoner as if they were his commanding superiors, I'm out.

Story was bearable up till chapter 3. Harry just going along with the Atreides was a stretch but whatever. Rania bit was so jarring that I had to stop. Not for me unfortunately.

A nice long running fic.
Very good. Thank you for the great read.
I hope you can continue and manage to finish.

This is a great story, I am sorry that people flame you, but they are the talentless readers that can't write. I unfortunately can't write good stories. Just a little info about me, I am 65 and have been reading since I was 5, I used to have a library of 1500 books but when I got married at 27 had to sell or give away most of them. I have read probably 15000 books of all jonris so I know a good story when I read one and trust me yours a good. Thank you for sharing.

Please continue with this

Go die. Suffer before dying first.

Does everyone in this story talk without breathing, or are you just retarded?

I like how you lied about having beta readers, even this far back.

I know you were too stupid to finish this, but have you ever heard of commas?

Just finished binge-reading this over the weekend. Amazing job. For the first half of the story I just kept wondering when the Auguamenti spell would make an appearance, and I am glad you did mention it. I love it, 10/10. Keep up the great work.

I do hope you continue this. I always enjoyed the Dune series, including those works from Frank's son and some other associated authors. And yes, having a harry potter add in only makes this particulart "universe" a bit more interesting. In fact, it does, in some small ways, explain some of the mysticism in the origianl dune works.

This story still rocks my socks off.