Reviews for Chosen Ones
giginoreofficial chapter 3 . 6/12
Story was bearable up till chapter 3. Harry just going along with the Atreides was a stretch but whatever. Rania bit was so jarring that I had to stop. Not for me unfortunately.
AJGuardian chapter 25 . 4/26
A nice long running fic.
Very good. Thank you for the great read.
I hope you can continue and manage to finish.
Jimhh chapter 24 . 3/17
This is a great story, I am sorry that people flame you, but they are the talentless readers that can't write. I unfortunately can't write good stories. Just a little info about me, I am 65 and have been reading since I was 5, I used to have a library of 1500 books but when I got married at 27 had to sell or give away most of them. I have read probably 15000 books of all jonris so I know a good story when I read one and trust me yours a good. Thank you for sharing.
Damarius chapter 25 . 3/13
Please continue with this
FlawedBauthor chapter 11 . 3/12
Go die. Suffer before dying first.
FlawedBauthor chapter 8 . 3/12
Does everyone in this story talk without breathing, or are you just retarded?
FlawedBauthor chapter 6 . 3/11
I like how you lied about having beta readers, even this far back.
FlawedBauthor chapter 1 . 3/11
I know you were too stupid to finish this, but have you ever heard of commas?
slocuautla chapter 25 . 3/11
Just finished binge-reading this over the weekend. Amazing job. For the first half of the story I just kept wondering when the Auguamenti spell would make an appearance, and I am glad you did mention it. I love it, 10/10. Keep up the great work.
Visionless1 chapter 25 . 3/8
I do hope you continue this. I always enjoyed the Dune series, including those works from Frank's son and some other associated authors. And yes, having a harry potter add in only makes this particulart "universe" a bit more interesting. In fact, it does, in some small ways, explain some of the mysticism in the origianl dune works.
KzintiKiller chapter 25 . 1/24
This story still rocks my socks off.
Paulv69 chapter 25 . 10/5/2023
liked the premise of your story buy you seem to be trying to play up the political side like Mr Herbert and it clashes with the hp universe to much for me but please keep writing story's while it was not my cup of tea I did enjoy what I could read of it . I got 15 chapters in before I lost 2ability to keep going
Kelley21 chapter 25 . 9/30/2023
Awesome chapter…. can’t wait to see where the story goes
Anon chapter 20 . 9/25/2023
Absolutely love it, even if some Dune fanatics dislike/reject the expanded universe. Keep up the great work!
MalSer chapter 25 . 9/17/2023
Great story, I look forward to more!
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