Reviews for I Will Not Break
nbp chapter 1 . 12/19/2016
so... are you coming back? you have a lot of great stories and you mentioned comint back 2 years ago so I would certainly read (and review) your stuff if you come back.
Sailor Dragonball 87 chapter 7 . 6/27/2016
GREAT! Please continue this fic, AND IN THE NAME OF ALL THAT IS DBZ, FREE SON GOHAN! He was framed! Remember when Gohan asked Kishimoto about contacting Baba, but Kishimoto just laughed? Why didn't any of Gohan's friends or family contact her on their own? They could also use the dragonballs to wish that the juries at his appeals find him innocent beyond a reasonable doubt! Were there security cameras with night vision in the park? That would prove Gohan's innocence! What is this 'darkness'? The judge's relation to the victim should be considered a conflict of interest, and he should be removed from the case! Please start updating again!
gabelou1991 chapter 7 . 7/5/2015
Dracoforce7 chapter 7 . 9/19/2014
I have an idea for your story. Why not bring Cell back so they have to free Gohan from jail because
Mr. Satan tells them the truth of the Cell address
Divergentdimension chapter 7 . 5/14/2014
This is really good and i hope you finish this but try to make the chapters longer!
wolf-guest chapter 7 . 11/17/2013
I would love for you to finish this story. It is really good and unique, not a cliche. I thank you for a different kind of story and would greatly appreciate it if you could finish it. :)
lelekaka chapter 7 . 1/28/2013
loved xD
Zuchiku chapter 7 . 12/28/2012
Hey not sure if you still writing I like the idea behind the story, I would have expected that Gohan would go either to the police or to Videl instead of Bulma but I think it works out.
Reading the story I was thinking to make it flow better you could start out with the Chapter "Murder" and than incorporate whatever you want from Chapter 1 into "where we started" , that way you don't repeat so much. Or you start with Gohan POV in the Cell in the present thinking back to the dance, similar to what you did in the Chapter "Beginnings".
Again I like the idea of the story and how the Judge is described with an evil aura, hopefully you get back to it.
taking it easy chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
If I were in his position, the last words I would say would be, "I frogive you for mistaking me for a murderer," Then I would hug the judge. XP
Vuvuzela Hero chapter 7 . 6/12/2012
Great story! I loved the intro, it had me at tears! You do an excellent job of showing the character's emotions, and ignore people who try to make you think your stories arn't good. I have read all of your stories and they are among the best online! I wish you would continue them soon, it would be a shame to never see them completed! I hope to see the next update soon!
Lunarue chapter 7 . 4/24/2012
I'm really into this story, not gonna lie! I cried like a baby when I read the first chapter :'o update! :D
miketech chapter 7 . 1/18/2012
Great story so far...hope you decide to continue it!
Guest chapter 7 . 1/6/2012
Love the story poor gohan you think piccolo would be a little smarter and thought of the dragonballs because of kami and dende
Writer of Angelus chapter 7 . 10/6/2011
i want to see this fic updated as well. how could videl do that to gohan after she learned so much from him?

*wipes tear* also! i wanna see if the real murderer will be found! LET GOHAN GO!
Mimmi85 chapter 7 . 10/6/2011
I hope you'll update soon, cause I really want to know what will happen next!
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