Reviews for Harry's war
senawario chapter 1 . 1/19
I can tolerate a lot of mis-spellings, but "to" and "too" - done multiple times, not just once or twice - is very hard to take.

You need to perfect 2- and 3-letter words before giving yourself grandiose sounding names and attempting to write complete sentences.
Guest chapter 15 . 1/15
On your "not homophobic" note a few chapters ago; I've been conducting an experiment of sorts at my school. A few months ago a few homosexuals, transexuals and lesbians came to my school to talk about tolerance and that sort of stuff, and of course, everyone was nodding their heads and saying "Of course we're not homophobic! Being gay is fine!" and generally making all the right noises in all the right places.
I decided to test this.
While other guys at my school (note: I am male) constantly make lewd remarks about female celebrities and yearmates and the likes, I'm doing the same. But with male celebrities. And you can instantly notice that while everyone made pro-tolerance noises, very few look at ease with homosexual remarks or comments.
For example, in a conversation with some of my friends (all present friends were male), someone brought up one of those 'What would you choose' questions, where the 'obviously' preferred answer has some negative consequence, and the 'obviously' less favoured answer has a very positive one.
The question was: "Would you rather bang Emma Watson once, but then have to call for Internet for the rest of your life(as in, tell someone over the phone what you wanted him to click/type), or, would you rather be banged by Daniel Radcliffe once, but then have permanent acces to the fastest Internet on the planet for the rest of your life?" I, seeing this as the perfect opportunity, jumped in with "You had me at Daniel Radcliffe" followed by a longing sigh. This was followed by the other guys smiling awkwardly and shuffling away slightly on their chairs. All these guys had been all pro-tolerance mere weeks before, so what had happened?
While most people in Western countries go around saying they're tolerant and acceptant, not many of them are. Why else would people be insulted at being called "Fag"? What makes slash so different from straight stories? I can understand an unwillingness to read homoerotic porn as a straight person; I'd be a hypocritic otherwise! But in a story of Harry betraying the Light, where the pairing is really a sidenote and it's about action and adventure, who cares if the person he's seeing is Markus Flint, Dalphne Greengrass, Theodore Nott or Tracey Davis?
TiffBaby101 chapter 15 . 12/19/2014
haha nice ending
NarutoSpardaUzumaki chapter 15 . 12/11/2014
I didn't like the epilogue too much. I understand that Harry became a bit arrogant and cocky after his defeat of Voldemort but this is an extreme. Anyway great story :-)
James Lysander chapter 3 . 12/8/2014
It's about damn time Albus Dumbledore hot a kick up his arse to remind him that
the war against Lord Voldemort is Harry's, and his alone. Dumbledore's war was the
war against Grindelwald. As for Ron Weasley...I really don't see how he can be
considered a friend of Harry's with his terrible jealousy. Nor do I regard Ginny
Weasley or Hermione Granger as loyal friends. In fact, I only see Neville
Longbottom and Luna Lovegood at Harry's truly loyal friends. Sure, they come
from different houses. and maybe Luna does have slightly oddball ideas, but she and Neville have never betrayed Harry.
Goose chapter 1 . 10/27/2014
The main pairing should have been Harry/Delete button. This story blows.
Marj123 chapter 11 . 10/23/2014
Getting just a bit too gruesome for me. I stopped liking Harry when he made that nasty crack to Ron about paying Hermione. Well written though, and I enjoyed the first chapters. It's just that I need to like the main character if I am to enjoy a story.
tkepner chapter 15 . 10/12/2014
Good story, thanks for writing it.
LWJ2 chapter 6 . 10/8/2014
Oh, my, the Weaselette dreaming about Draco "Wait until I write my father" Malfoy. That should be lovely.
LWJ2 chapter 2 . 10/8/2014
Wow, a Fudge with balls and a spine, not something one sees often. I like what you've done here and am looking forward to finishing your story. Thanks for sharing it.
kaiserwolfe chapter 15 . 9/10/2014
quick and crash
Guest chapter 6 . 8/25/2014
I love this story so far. I thought this chapter was great!
saekdk chapter 10 . 8/5/2014
well nvm. just red the AN i feel dumb again.
saekdk chapter 9 . 8/5/2014
lol blaise is a boy, not a girl XD
rookie802 chapter 15 . 7/20/2014
Good story!
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