|Reviews for Harry's war|
| Aries-Antares chapter 7 . 3/13
Nice, you remember the diary, but you forget that voldemort also created the ring while still a student. Cannon says the diary was made early in his seventh year while the ring was made in Easter or around Easter that same year.
| xotug chapter 15 . 2/2
I've just end the reading of your fic. I like it. It's funny. It's not a masterpiece but it's easy to read and quite well writing.
But, you gain my heart forever when you insert all the references of CM Punk (Cult of Personality and "Best in the World"). ¡That was awesome!
Well done, xotug.
P.D: Sorry for my english. I'm from Spain and that's not my first language. :D
| Venus914 chapter 15 . 1/18
I dont understand. Hermione, Ron, Ginny didnt get punished. They live good lives. Whatever happened to karma? They didnt help because if Harry.
| Venus914 chapter 1 . 1/18
Maybe Luna? Of all the girls in the books, i've always been partial to Luna because she is likeable. I hate Ginny and Hermione. Daphne is great in fanfiction but we dont really know her, you know. She is not mentioned that much in the books and i doubt if she had speaking lines. So Luna is much more relatable because she's real.
| rowenasheir chapter 15 . 11/26/2013
| rowenasheir chapter 13 . 11/26/2013
sex does not love
| Ann chapter 6 . 11/24/2013
Too many o's sometimes in your to
| rowenasheir chapter 6 . 11/25/2013
too is only used to indicate a lot of something: too much food
off example: to switch off a light
of : one of the four
| Bjalf chapter 2 . 11/21/2013
Distracting spelling and grammar errors. You need a better Beta than Dobby.
| David chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
I love your stories but Hermione and Ron together just... No!
| moosejuice5 chapter 15 . 11/4/2013
loved it up until the epilogue; lunas the headmistress, he walks in to cult of personality, his kids come in one by one, luna announces him like a wrestler and the chanting just made it to WFT for me
| SarahMellark15 chapter 15 . 10/28/2013
Haha. I loved that soo much... Especially the last chapter. It was amazing. So good, i even told all my friends to read it :) 3
| akasanta chapter 15 . 10/12/2013
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/6/2013
Never mind I just read chapter 10
| Guest chapter 10 . 10/6/2013
You should have made harry write in the prophet about snaps being a spy to puss of Dumbledore and shape