|Reviews for spin the patterns of life|
| RootsOfAHotelWindow chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
Poor Ron. I really like this layout, it is very different but it works well.
| Mebina Sobriquet chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
It's really nice to see a poem that isn't completely angsty for a change. This has a really nice sort of wistful feel, a quiet sadness and acceptance. Well done!