|Reviews for Official|
| 2plus2make5 chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
| UbholySpectacle chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
I liked this a lot. Trying to keep the whole thing a secret is so in character for both of them. Nicely done.
| austheke chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
That was just plain adorable. Very cute!
Loved the line "True to her Gryffindor heart, she had told everyone."
| foreverHPfan chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
nice twist at the end
| theburninator chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
I think this is one of the best one shot Hermione and Severus fics I have read. Normally I kind of skim them but I was reading every word because you did such a good job with creating the story. Thanks!
| notwritten chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
That was very good. Keep smiling. :-)
| Nutters4Potter chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
Oh the rumors will continue... That was fun to read.
| kaijusaurusrex chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
It was awesome how Natalie was Dumbledore's and McGonagall's child, and it made a lot of sense. It was also really sweet, and very in character. Well done :)
| Hobbitpony chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
Good Stuff! Loved it.
| diamond-helen chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
Lovely story, made me smile. The twist about Natalie's parentage was great.
| stgulik chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
I liked this story, especially the dialog between the students, and the idea of a secret Hogwarts wedding. But it's not clear who Natalie's parents are. Albus and Minerva's?
| linlawless chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
very sweet story. :)
| duj chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
Cute. Very distinctive tone; you make a tired old plot seem new. (But the twist at the end didn't quite do it for me. *He* wasn't a gossip. Quite the opposite, he hugged his secrets - and everyone else's - close to his chest.)
| Aiden Snape chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
The Story that you created was amazing!
I totally Love it!
Hope there is a sequel
a / usher/a, a limewire/a
| Secrets Told At Dawn chapter 1 . 5/5/2011
This is almost exactly what a perfect Hermione/Severus pairing would be like. Ideally, I like the multi-chapter fictions, but this is the best Hermione/Severus one-shot I've seen on the site. Congratulations on being able to write such an awesome fiction!