Okay first of all Raven being able to remake the hiraishin is absolutely bullshit, and here's why number one she has absolutely no idea about anything to do with seals and let's not even forget the fact that number one it is probably the most dangerous seal to make, number two it is a seal made up of five SEAL matrixes and each matrix has thousands of characters that cannot be seen because they are microscopically sized and then connected to make a word of the wielder's choice the only thing that Raven is going to end up doing if she tried to copy this is potentially cause them to be sucked into a black hole there is a reason you have to be a master of seals to use and make the hiraishin. I have absolutely no idea if you're going to read this I have no idea if you even have interest in this website anymore considering this was last updated in 2020 and it's now 2025 but I just needed to get that out there because it would be completely impossible for them to use it, I will admit that I absolutely am loving The story so far but that is something that I absolutely cannot stand on this part so far because if they actually do copy this the only thing I'm going to end up doing is dropping the story completely because that is the absolutely most ridiculous thing possible there is absolutely no way they can do it.

omake: A mysterious voice speaks ethereally from the shadows: "Because it will, Kyuubi X. Because it will. MWAHAHAHAHAHA! *coughs and hacks; then in "normal voice"* Dang it! Another "hairball". Meh.
Toodles, Naruto, and, as a certain wizard once exclaimed: 'CONSTANT VIGILANCE!'" the being behind the voice silently fades away into the ether.

omake end.

Excellent chapters as always, my friend.
My apologies for taking so long to read and review them. I have been busy both online and offline catching up with my backlog of stories, and playing games.

Please continue when you may. Thank you. *warm grin*

What the use of reading this trash fic if useless naruto lose with all of his skill useless naruto still lose the DOBE really a DOBE

i hope the rest of the fic is not a copy of Red-X Rising

Your power levels are all over the place. Without any prep time Batman wouldn’t even be able to harm Naruto considering how durable he is. Additionally with how strong Naruto is he’d kill Batman if he seriously hit him. Batman is a normal dude who is an expert martial artist and world class detective. By implying that he can fight magical ninja Jesus in pure physical combat you are taking away from Batman’s character and making your power levels ridiculously inconsistent. It would be like Batman suddenly being able to punch out superman in a brawl, it’s just nonsense and goes totally against what Batman is supposed to represent.

magic can harm Kryptonians and you made kurama demon in nature so the cloak would have harmed Superboy so should of not need 3 tails worth in that situation

Chessire es mi favorita, por favor

omg I love the pirates of the Caribbean reference

Oi dumbass. Take this ching chong forgiveness bullshit and shove it right back up your ass, you limp dick rat shit. He doesn’t want to kill because of what, exactly?

I remember when I first learned the truth about Doctor Light in identity crisis, and that he was a powerful villain who did the unthinkable to Sue Dibny before Flash came back to JL HQ and stopped him. The titans will need to be careful, but my worry is for Mammoth's sister, Shimmer.

Loved it!

NOPE!

I look forward to the next chapter.

I thought this was abandoned.

I liked!
Naruto will only have children with jinx or he will also have them with super girl bone kara I would like more encounter between both

Please tell me this isn’t going to be a naruto heram with Hinayana hyuga I really really hate those types of fanfics do you how over used they are especially when they are already confirmed in cannon