Good story, but needs a finish. I really want to see Astrid take both Toothless and Hiccup together. There needs to be more stories with all three of them.

Bit confused about the pheromone thing and that afterwards Astrid is still horny and it didn’t wear off or something like that. Nonetheless fun to read.

This is a good chapter not the best as it would have been better with more sex but maybe the next chapter could have it where Astrid chooses between Hiccup and toothless

It was awsome. i want to read more!

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I mean.. Bruv... That wasn't horrible at all. Need to come out with more chapters tho.. Little disappointed with the damned obvious cliffhanger

good chapter maybe in the next chapter she forgives him and its still mating season and astrid, and toothless have sex again with her permission, and she ends up getting pregnant from toothless. then astrid and toothless keep it a secret from hiccup until he finds out later on that she has gotten pregnant from toothless. please read this writer and maybe add some of this into chapter 4

Hi. I would like to say that the descriptiveness of the text could be improved (Show, not tell). Otherwise, I got quite a good picture of the text. There's also a few grammar errors, like the use of contractions (I've, it's, etc.), particularly the use of “it's”, and when describing Toothless, "The dragons”. When describing something which Toothless (or a subject), we typically use “subject's _.”

Also, sorry for the long post, but Astrid's name is mispelled once.

This is really hot.

Much as I am grateful for the "Hiccup was out of the question, he was the same gender" line... wth, dragon suicide?

can you form some type of way that toothless can tell hiccup that he was just tired of being lonely every mating season because i just feel so bad for toothless

there is no rape .

Forgive me but it's nonsense. There is no story in rape this story .

wtf. why. why. why am I turned on. good job.

Ohhh quiero leer más :)