Oh dear. Let's hope that Astrid doesn't get pregnant with the next generation of Nightfuries. That would be REALLY awkward.

Please continue!

Lol, the ending was great!

I really don't care if you call this a flame, that was a rape story. Don't make anymore. Also the whole explination for toothless's logic for raping astrid is so amazingly holed I cant believe thats all you could come up with. Plz for humanities collective soul dont make anymore stories. There is already enough horrible events that happen every day in the real world that more horror is entirely unneeded. We made entertainment devices to escape from the sadness of the world dont fucking put more than there already is.

continue the story please tell us what happens afterwards

It was ok for your first try. I'm use to reading Hiccup and Toothless $ex stories. If you want read my Toothcup (toothless and hiccup) It's called Desire

Ok, firstly, I give you props for choosing your first lemon to be one that no one else has really done. Seriously, why aren't there more of these? Anyway, I feel as though this was a bit rushed, and having no dialogue really is a big nitpick for me. A little more insight into Toothless's and Astrid's thoguhts and emotions would've been nice, but as this is your first, I can forgive that. Oh yeah, and remember to capitalize your titles/

Omg awesome i was waiting so long for a toothless astrid story.

Your story was awesome hot and nice idea with the pheromones and so on

w00t! first comment!