|Reviews for Fooled: Day and Night Mutual Slavery|
| Lamorak Korving chapter 15 . 8/16/2013
"Her slave took a deep breath, lay down, and thought of England". ENGLAND? Are you nuts or
something? Ranma and Akane live in JAPAN, or didja give them a freaking time machine?
| Lamorak Korving chapter 14 . 8/16/2013
FINALLY! After years of Ranma and Akane denying their feelings and love for each other, they
finally managed to express themselves. Pity it took magic rings to bring it out, however, though
I was shocked to find out it was Kasumi who provided Akane with the mallets, just to preserve
| Lamorak Korving chapter 13 . 8/16/2013
This is probably the funniest chapter of "Fooled: Day and Night Mutual Slavery" that I have
read so far at least. I am glad that Nodoka is back in the realms of probability, and Ukyo
would also make a good slave. She could find and enchanted slave collar, and out of curiosity,
put it on, only to have it fuse itself closed, making her Ranma's slave, while Nabiki's punishment
should be, as I HAVE mentioned before, prison! Got it?
| Lamorak Korving chapter 6 . 8/15/2013
Well, at least Cologne, Shampoo and Mousse are in character.
| Lamorak Korving chapter 4 . 8/15/2013
Well, apparently I was wrong about Genma and Soun. I forgot that those two idiots are
totally bonkers and detached completely from reality. Kasumii, Ranma and Akane seem to be
the only sane people in this fanfiction. Nabiki should have been hauled before the courts for her
criminal stunt, as should Nodoka.
| Lamorak Korving chapter 2 . 8/15/2013
"Fooled: Day and Night Mutual Slavery" is one of the best Ranma & Akane fanfiction stories
I've come across so far. Consensual slavery is in fact pretty common these days. Granted,
Human Trafficking is the vilest form of slavery, but consensual slavery-in which a person
willingly consents to be the slave of another person, is tolerated. Ranma and Akane do seem to
be more affectionate, and in character, but Nabiki is OOC, and so is Nodoka Saotome. The only
other person still in character is Kasumi. Genma and Soun, however, are hardly likely to be
pleased when they hear of Nabiki's actions.
| FirestarterFLCL chapter 15 . 4/10/2013
Funny, interesting and kinky. Would love to read more. Keep up the good work.
| luger 7 chapter 15 . 3/28/2013
Freaky stuff, dude!
| Shinzochi chapter 15 . 3/25/2013
i love your story but it sucks that the link for your page on bearchive doesn't work all it does is go to the main page, an while going to the free section can be done that is about it cause using the search has the same result no matter what is searched for and trying to get to the actual stories selection doesn't work either because it just loads and loads and you are not listed in the selection that is displayed for the stories selection
| Compucles chapter 6 . 11/22/2012
Hmm, kind of like Inuyasha holding out until the sun comes up on the night of a new moon.
| Compucles chapter 4 . 11/22/2012
That was brilliant making fun of all of those fanon cliches, most of which I agree are ridiculous. Of course, in-universe Akane would know her mother's name despite the fact that we don't know what it is.
| Compucles chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
Naughty, naughty, Nabiki. If you're going to trick them into thinking they're married, you might as well trick them into actually getting married. It's not nice to trick people into pre-marital sex if you don't know whether or not they'd prefer to wait.
| Hermione destroyer of worlds chapter 9 . 8/9/2012
Ranma's hair was red - Not in the colored pages of the manga (by colored pages I mean the one volume Viz colored and the 33 out 407 chapters that had colored pages in the original Shounen Sunday release) were the color was black.
| Hermione destroyer of worlds chapter 8 . 8/9/2012
I like that you pointed out some difference between mediums since the mixing of the two annoy me. Also Ranma generally sleeps in pajamas after the first third of the manga (probably because of Happosai). I also liked that you point out that Akane cuts class and sleeps in class since too many fics forget that.
| Hermione destroyer of worlds chapter 6 . 8/9/2012
I never got that. The anime, particularly the newest oav, implies that Shampoo would owe money to Nabiki. The manga though clearly shows that she wouldn't do that and I just can't see Shampoo at least manga Shampoo doing that.
-The failed wedding I had no part in, she did it herself.
Why would Cologne care? As far as she is concerned Ranma is Shampoo's husband. Stopping him from marrying someone else is the proper thing to do.
I seriously doubt that would stop Shampoo from pursuing Ranma. A change of tactics sure but I just don't see her giving up that easily. She has sided with Ranma over her grandmother before, professed a willingness to stay with Ranma in Japan, needed a kiss from him to avoid being stuck as a cat forever since he was her true love, etc. Shampoo is shown to really love Ranma in the manga, she'd probably rather die than gave up on him.