add fem kyuubi as his sewife

So it's just another generic, sh*tty, nonsensical bashing fic where no logic or common sense exists.

Now this was a great fic to read. I hate Naruto Banishment fics for the most part, but this one is one of my few exceptions. It’s good to see characters like Sasuke and sakura be understanding and sympathetic for naruto, though Sakura did have to get called out lol. I also love how Danzo and Koharu support naruto and are anti civilian council. Overall, I’d definitely use this as an example as to how to write a good naruto banished fic. Splendid work.

Ok, so I just want some clarification because isn't Otogakure where this said village is going to be? It's in between the lands of lightning and earth although just above the land of fire. So where the hell is this village going to be lmao?

christ with all the author notes this is probably at least 10k less words than what it says

why do the hokage always let the council tell them what to do just kill all of them and get new ones

You do realize Naruto is aloud to use the Nine tails chakra. I swear you dumbasses are just dumb. Naruto was shunned and ignored because he was a child holding something that could wipe out the village. If Naruto was a older maybe in his late teens or early adult age then he wouldn't have been hated

like the story please update soon and more often.

please tell me there is a sequel

Hi

Great Story is there going to be a part 2

Well i am looking forward to the sequal when it will be done since the story itself was pretty good.

the fuck? her attitude turn 180 degrees

I don't like how Naruto just gives every ounce of info he has he should hold some info for himself. And I don't really like how the Kage's are so easily letting him build the village.

No Yamanka can mind walk Naruto. Since he's a Jinchuriki, Kurama(Kyuubi) would kick them out since they'd directly go to his mindscape. Also They can't mindwalk other Jinchuriki.