Reviews for Naruto: The Betrayed
Guest chapter 4 . 9/23
that was sick what he did to that girl and i wish the same would happen to you
Guest chapter 15 . 7/29
potato got sad
Guest chapter 9 . 7/29
potato nothing more needed to be said.
1274057harman chapter 26 . 7/19
please update soon can't wait to read more
kingthe13 chapter 20 . 7/18
best death ever like it was so sad.
most storys like this have her be a total bitch and eventually naruto kills her but in this you did a great job making her redemable character and a tragic death by minato
squidneko chapter 25 . 6/24
when i first read the first chapter"wow this story is amazing" now i just want to wash my brain. rei is such baby really she had her parents love that naruto never had so is easy for her to forgive them. she just bitch with tears.
cocopuff1569 chapter 26 . 6/9
Update update update now i want to read more
Guest chapter 26 . 6/7
Cool please write more
Nate chapter 24 . 5/29
Bawahahaha forgive that bitch?!


Contrary to popular belief, some shit is NOT forgivable.
ARSLOTHES chapter 26 . 5/18
Hope you continue and finish this story, its really good
HitmaN007 chapter 26 . 5/8
Nice one bro , please update bro
void242 chapter 26 . 4/24
you need to use more punctuation..and at the right place
hakon2feb chapter 26 . 3/20
Ok, so this is the last chapter you have written so far :)
Naruto learns something new about his power, and ends up leaving for Makai without Kiyomi... Wonder what will happen to the demoness now that Naruto is gone.
Anyways, the situation with Rei is unresolved, so i hope you will do something about that... Can't have Rei lose the last part of her family.

Keep up your good work :)

hakon2feb chapter 25 . 3/20
Ok, so not the best makeup chapter... Oh, it wasn't supposed to be a makeup chapter... Um, that makes me a bit sad... And if the story ends in like 2-4 chapters, then the chances of getting back together is slim to none T_T
Atleast they got some frustrasion out by fighting each other...

hakon2feb chapter 24 . 3/20
Ok, so Naruto hears the full story from Kushina herself... Angry people are one of the types that tell the hardest truths, and unfortunately Naruto was one of them... Hopefully he can make it up to Rei, because i would feel sad if she became detached from her one remaining brother (Naruto's twin doesn't count, since he's so mean. :p)

Anyways... Unfair deal aside, having to sacrifice the firstborn is a bit cliche :p

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