Reviews for Naruto: The Betrayed
Nate chapter 24 . 5/29
Bawahahaha forgive that bitch?!

Never.

Contrary to popular belief, some shit is NOT forgivable.
ARSLOTHES chapter 26 . 5/18
Hope you continue and finish this story, its really good
hitman007.pl chapter 26 . 5/8
Nice one bro , please update bro
void242 chapter 26 . 4/24
you need to use more punctuation..and at the right place
hakon2feb chapter 26 . 3/20
Hi.
Ok, so this is the last chapter you have written so far :)
Naruto learns something new about his power, and ends up leaving for Makai without Kiyomi... Wonder what will happen to the demoness now that Naruto is gone.
Anyways, the situation with Rei is unresolved, so i hope you will do something about that... Can't have Rei lose the last part of her family.

Keep up your good work :)

hakon2feb.
hakon2feb chapter 25 . 3/20
Hi.
Ok, so not the best makeup chapter... Oh, it wasn't supposed to be a makeup chapter... Um, that makes me a bit sad... And if the story ends in like 2-4 chapters, then the chances of getting back together is slim to none T_T
Atleast they got some frustrasion out by fighting each other...

hakon2feb.
hakon2feb chapter 24 . 3/20
Hi.
Ok, so Naruto hears the full story from Kushina herself... Angry people are one of the types that tell the hardest truths, and unfortunately Naruto was one of them... Hopefully he can make it up to Rei, because i would feel sad if she became detached from her one remaining brother (Naruto's twin doesn't count, since he's so mean. :p)

Anyways... Unfair deal aside, having to sacrifice the firstborn is a bit cliche :p

hakon2feb.
hakon2feb chapter 23 . 3/20
Hi.
Great chapter :)
Naruto manages to take another bijuu, and this time the previous host lives :D It might sound impossible, but for a mix of demon and human it worked out fine :)
The fight was pretty good, even though it was clear that they could have lost if things had turned out bad.
Now that i think about it, i wonder what happened to Suna... I mean, Gaara and Naruto became friends after the chuunin exam, so that should lead to some bad blood between Suna and Konoha after Naruto was killed... Oh well. :p

hakon2feb.
hakon2feb chapter 22 . 3/20
Hi.
Ok, so they are back in Iwa. Safe and sound...
Invading Konoha didn't go as planned, but atleast Rei is safe. :)
Perhaps there is a way to kill the fallen God though... Let's hope so, or else this story will end badly :p

hakon2feb.
hakon2feb chapter 21 . 3/20
Hi.
Ok, so another cool chapter :)
Minimal character death so far, but i guess it can't be helped. Don't want the story to end too soon, now do we? :p
Anyways, Rei is finally together with her brother, escaping her own wedding in the process. Her brother an eye short. *Shrugs* Could be worse.
Not sure what i feel about you summoning the fallen God though(a bit convenient that Kushina just so happens to have a summoning contract with it.)... Naruto and Kiyomi are probably alot weaker now than they were, and probably lack a few abilities as well T_T All that hard work for nothing :/ Guess it is bijuu hunting next :p

hakon2feb.
hakon2feb chapter 20 . 3/20
Hi.
Ok, so another good chapter :)
It was sad to see Tsunade go, but i think it was for the better. She is now together with those she loves. That she at the end of the fight realised that she could still "win", along with the memory with her daughter was really touching.
About the fights... They were ok, i guess... A bit of spamming with the Hiraishin jutsu, but i guess a hokage doesn't fight fair. Not sure why he wanted to use the rasengan in the first place though... Like he expected her to survive if he just shaved away her stomach? A deadly jutsu isn't something you just show off.

hakon2feb.
hakon2feb chapter 19 . 3/20
Hi.
Ok, so another great chapter :)
That Tsunade and Jiraiya had a child was a nice plot twist. Jiraiya was always loyal to the village first, so i guess it makes sense that he neglected his daughter. (He didn't do much better with his godson in canon...) That their child died during the kyuubi attack would be enough reason for Tsunade to never want to return. It would also make it very tempting to accept what Orochimaru offered.
And Sakura... Do i need to say more? The poor girl actually has to train physically now :p Well... She isn't totally useless though, since it isn't that hard to learn how to fight with swords or other tools. (I'm betting Tenten doesn't use chakra to throw her kunai, swords, axes, kama, etc...) However it looks like she really wants to learn hand to hand combat, even if she will have the biggest disadvantage fighting with that against shinobi.

hakon2feb.
hakon2feb chapter 18 . 3/20
Hi.
Good chapter :)
Ok, so we now know why Akatsuki hasn't been involved yet... It was all controlled by Jiraiya and the hokage. Those crafty bastards...
Anyways... Rei is almost wedded away to the "last" Uchiha, but luckily an uninvited guest appears :p I'm not sure Naruto is dressed propperly for a wedding, but then again, you don't need to dress right to blow up a party :p Naruto was a bit early though, since the "priest" hadn't come to the part where he asks if anyone has any objections :p (Probably taking a leaf from Anko's book :p)

hakon2feb.
hakon2feb chapter 17 . 3/20
Hi.
Ok, so i had to go back to the previous chapter just to check... I originally thought you removed the chakra from both Sasuke and Kakashi as well as Sakura, but it looks like i was mistaken. Bah. I almost hoped that you would drain them all, but i guess it wouldn't be any fun if you did :p (Almost killing one, and crushing the pride of the other is enough for now :p)
Anyways... Naruto has successfully integrated the 4 and 5 tails, so his and Kiyomi's powers are steadily growing :) We still haven't heard from Akatsuki though, so i guess they are either lost in madness after losing 4 tailed beasts or have simply died off. (I really wanted to know what happened to Itachi :/) Anyways, they aren't major players in the story, since i doubt anyone of them could stand up to Naruto as he is now.

hakon2feb.
hakon2feb chapter 16 . 3/20
Hi.
Ok, so another good chapter :)
Naruto sends a clear message to Konoha. Only his sister is safe from his wrath :p Even though he didn't kill any of them, they now live a life worse than death, since they can never become shinobi again.
I wonder if the Uchiha still wants to marry Rei after this... The money is still there, but all his abilities are gone... Atleast now it will be very difficult for him to rape her.
Naruto gets a good deal with the Tsuchikage... That the bijuu aren't sealed into his own sons anymore is just a bonus :p (On top of Tsunade's strength).

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