Reviews for Naruto: The Betrayed
S.P. Roy chapter 26 . 7/10
great story so far. I hope that you are not dead and will continue it.
Fanfic9000 chapter 26 . 6/28
continue the story
Fanfic9000 chapter 12 . 6/27
I mean chapter 12
the 2 did not go in
Fanfic9000 chapter 12 . 6/27
I agree with you in chapter one
rape is the one thing I will not stand in real life
(unless its cosplay with your willing spouse/partner)
iywe chapter 26 . 5/20
*shrugs* I have read worse than this, I do not like the whole idea about Makai or demons in general, but then again that's only my point of view, on other hand, I hated that Rei attitude towards Naruto, Naruto was killed not before getting gut like a fish, and she expects to forgave them all? eventually his Mother and Father who were the only beginning of his suffering? that's stupid if you ask me.

But a good Dark!Fic overall?
sasukesdoom chapter 2 . 5/12
hard to read the explanation because of some run on sentences
LoudAndProud24 chapter 11 . 5/3
I would have poured the tea on Sasuke
SEEKER452 chapter 12 . 4/10
great fic keep it up please
Guest chapter 19 . 4/5
of course you would make the mother care more you fucking sexist piece of shit
fuck you and your ultra feminist mind
fucking idiot
Guest chapter 13 . 4/4
of course
you're definitely an ultra feminist woman if you have a girl who is afraid of men in your story
Guest chapter 11 . 4/4
of course you would make a guy rape a girl you fucking sexist
Guest chapter 9 . 4/4
end omake was stupid
Mizukodai chapter 1 . 1/31
As one reviewer stated, there's bashing and then there's s**t like this. As I've told you before, keep this Kishimoto garbage dead.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/16
Ohh damn... this is good.
KnightBloom chapter 26 . 12/10/2017
Yo, please update this. I'm really enjoying the story so far and love how fresh it is, if you know what I mean
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