|Reviews for Dog Sees God: Confessions of an Alternate Ending|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
I couldn't even get through this story because of the inconsistencies. First, what Matt says to Beethoven when he walks into the music room is "Hey there, Liberace" not "You're no Liberace." While music stands can be sharp they aren't sharp enough for someone with broken hands/fingers to kill themselves with. Speaking of which how the hell is Beethoven HOLDING the music stand with BROKEN fingers? There is no way he would be able to do that.
I can see what you were going for, but sadly you missed the mark to the point of making me stop reading before I even finished.
| Emeraldworld chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
Ive read the play many times but never seen it performed.
Personally I liked the ending written, it gave it more of a message to have beethoven kill himself.
terrible play, really terrible, but I love it so very much.
in the play matt gets suspended for a week
i did enjoy your take on it though
keep up the good work
you write really well
| Fox Loves Shinigami chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
i kno how u feel i saw the play yesterday and loved every momnet, but the ending confused the hell out of me. i like ur ending better. _ Ja.