Reviews for Hindsight Is Not Perfect
WrathofAjax chapter 10 . 10/5
this is literally the first mention of Xanatos in all of the fanfics I've read. i was really beginning to think that no one else on here had read the Obi Wan Chronicles
Sean Malloy-1 chapter 12 . 9/24
Not sure if I'll go for the sequel
DoctorWizardCreatorPhoenixGod chapter 9 . 9/21
DoctorWizardCreatorPhoenixGod chapter 8 . 9/21
DOCTOR WHO! DOCTOR WHO! WHO. IS. YOUR. FAVORITE?! I'm undecided between Matt Smith, David Tennant, Peter Capaldi, and Tom Baker, but I LOVE them all. Did you hear about Jodie Whittaker as the new Doctor? One sentence. I. Love. The. British. What is your favorite episode? I'm between Day Of The Doctor, The Bells Of Saint John, and a few others. Do you know this quote? 'Great men are forged in fire, it is the privelage of lesser men to light the flame.' or this one? 'I will be happy if I am ever half the man you are, Clara Oswald.' Both by the War Doctor, 'the Doctor on the day when it wasn't possible to get it right.-11thDoctor' or 'You'll never be able to live with yourself.-10th Doctor.' 'Trust me, I've seen it once.-11th Doctor.' 'And I never want to see it again.-10th Doctor.' 'So this time I'm gonna help you get it right.-11th.' 'Together both of you are going to stop the timer at the same time.-10th' 'And the key to perfect negotiation... Not knowing which side you're on.-11th.' 'So, for the next few hours, no one in this room will remember if they're Human, or Zygon.-10th.' 'Whoops-ee-doo!-11th.' All three Doctors raise they're
Resalicia Belger chapter 1 . 8/31
I love this story, thank you so much for sharing it!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/25
This made me cry. Thank you
Winto-kun chapter 1 . 8/22
I've just started reading this fic, and so far, so good. The language is flawless and the flow is welcoming.
Stormshadow13 chapter 13 . 5/17
I really enjoied this fic. Looking forwards to seeing how Anakin changes things.
Brievel chapter 5 . 3/21
A fix-it fic that actually fixes it! And Anakin is actually using his brain! But, um, how does he propose to have a son if he doesn't marry Padme?
RedSoulDreemurr chapter 2 . 2/12
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Kestrel Illusio chapter 13 . 2/10
I really enjoyed your writing,especially Yoda. He's one of my favorite characters and I think you wrote all of your characters well while remaining true to their original personalities. This was a great story.
kabs9000 chapter 4 . 2/4
kabs9000 chapter 2 . 2/4
Very nice
yargolancelot chapter 10 . 12/27/2016
Great story, unfortunately I will have to stop here, I could have lived with Qui-Gon dying again, or Ani failing and falling, but not both, not in the same chapter, not before anything good happened. I like how you wrote Ani, it seemed very believable, you seem to know how to write Obi-Wan very well too; I'm just disappointed with Qui-Gon's death, I knew it was coming when Ani thought he might tell things to him, the classical cliché, Qui-Gon might as well have showed him a picture of a loved one and told him that after this mission he would see her again in a long time. It feels liked you only killed him off because you wanted Obi-Wan to train him, and then I took a quick glance at your user name and it hit me, while I can see how this is very possible and natural, it takes a tool on your reader, every great story has lots of losses, but this one came without a single win, and it feels forced. Good job though, I would recommend this to anyone interested on reading a good time travel/star wars fanfiction, the one reason I won't read is that I had Qui-Gon dying on me one too many times. I might give this another chance in the future.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/24/2016
Anakin is OOC. He is too much anxious. He was always confident, but not in this book.
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