Reviews for Hindsight Is Not Perfect
Stormshadow13 chapter 13 . 5/17
I really enjoied this fic. Looking forwards to seeing how Anakin changes things.
Brievel chapter 5 . 3/21
A fix-it fic that actually fixes it! And Anakin is actually using his brain! But, um, how does he propose to have a son if he doesn't marry Padme?
RedSoulDreemurr chapter 2 . 2/12
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Kestrel Illusio chapter 13 . 2/10
I really enjoyed your writing,especially Yoda. He's one of my favorite characters and I think you wrote all of your characters well while remaining true to their original personalities. This was a great story.
kabs9000 chapter 4 . 2/4
kabs9000 chapter 2 . 2/4
Very nice
yargolancelot chapter 10 . 12/27/2016
Great story, unfortunately I will have to stop here, I could have lived with Qui-Gon dying again, or Ani failing and falling, but not both, not in the same chapter, not before anything good happened. I like how you wrote Ani, it seemed very believable, you seem to know how to write Obi-Wan very well too; I'm just disappointed with Qui-Gon's death, I knew it was coming when Ani thought he might tell things to him, the classical cliché, Qui-Gon might as well have showed him a picture of a loved one and told him that after this mission he would see her again in a long time. It feels liked you only killed him off because you wanted Obi-Wan to train him, and then I took a quick glance at your user name and it hit me, while I can see how this is very possible and natural, it takes a tool on your reader, every great story has lots of losses, but this one came without a single win, and it feels forced. Good job though, I would recommend this to anyone interested on reading a good time travel/star wars fanfiction, the one reason I won't read is that I had Qui-Gon dying on me one too many times. I might give this another chance in the future.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/24/2016
Anakin is OOC. He is too much anxious. He was always confident, but not in this book.
bLuewErewOlf25 chapter 13 . 12/17/2016
Rankin de Merthyr chapter 10 . 12/12/2016
I swear, if this turns into another "Canon: a retelling" I'm going to be disappointed.
Rankin de Merthyr chapter 6 . 12/12/2016
Since you just raised the flag Traavis; 100%
Rankin de Merthyr chapter 3 . 12/12/2016
Do it fagget! Embrace the grey!
pixelherodev chapter 8 . 12/4/2016
They'll be asking that forever!
pixelherodev chapter 5 . 12/4/2016
Actually, it was rather obvious WITHOUT the Force. "I - I mean, the Queen," oh, nothing suspicious here! No more suspicious than the second element on the periodic table!

(The 2nd is Helium. I'm listening to Helium by Plain White Ts right now, so I couldn't stop the comment)
reptoholic chapter 13 . 11/30/2016
NOw I see it, lol
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