|Reviews for Metamorphosis|
| TheDualWriter chapter 2 . 9/2/2013
Please, please, please, write some more. I know that it's probably been a while, but you are a wonderful writer and, just by looking at the number of reviewers that you got, I know that you have a captivated audience. The way that you portray Wheatley and GLaDOS is amazing and I can't wait to see how Chell turns out. I really hope that you keep this story going. It is far to good to abandon.
| 999 the 9th chapter 2 . 8/26/2013
Are you planning on continuing this?
| snakeofdreams chapter 2 . 9/14/2012
| VioletzeEcoFreak chapter 2 . 4/3/2012
You had me at "Partner. Friend. Together." Everything since has just made me love this fic more.
Seriously, you are a flippin' fantastic writer, and your insights into Wheatley and GlaDOS leave me full of feelings that are difficult to express, but are very cheerful. I tell my pals to read just the first chapter and it basically sums up my headcanon about Wheatley through the game.
Since I love this fic and the potential it has to be truly epic (plus, 76 reviews for two chapters? I am a jealous, jealous writer) I have to ask: do you plan to keep going with more chapters? Even if you don't, you should be proud of just how well you got into the character's heads. Hope to see more from you!
| Tree Climber chapter 2 . 2/17/2012
Wow, this is a beautiful fanfiction!It's such a shame you never finished.
| Rogue Requiem chapter 2 . 11/4/2011
Oh, God, UPDATE!
This story is brilliant, brilliant, BRILLIANT! Genius, I say! You have written Wheatley, GLaDOS, and Chell so wonderfully, particularly the former two. So, so well. I'll admit, my heart hurt as I let out a gasp of despair when I read that GLaDOS crushed Wheatley-again (it about killed me when she did it in the game the first time I played it. Before I realized that he was fine for the most part.) And he'll be fine in this story, too, right? Yes. Of course. I'm in obvious denial over here, can you tell?
So, yes, please update when you can. You write truly beautifully, and I'd love to see where you choose to go with this. Best of luck!
| pauliina chapter 2 . 9/22/2011
I love this story. I genuinely do. And I hate nagging and I feel sort of guilty for asking this, I ask if you would please consider continuing this? This is a great, wonderful story, and I'd hate to see it end like this...
| Uzi212 chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
I know you have probably abandoned this but, PLEASE KEEP WRITING THIS!
| Starburstia chapter 2 . 8/8/2011
simply amazing. good good job! I tried to write GLaDOS once, and then threw my pencil in the air and concluded I had to scour Portal 2 for dialogue because I want to kidnap those script writers and implant them in my head JEEZ.
so good job. for real. it's so... so... accurate! and amazing in general.
| Uzi212 chapter 2 . 7/22/2011
Yay next chapter about chell
| land law is for losers chapter 2 . 7/21/2011
Would you, if you could be so kind, give me a birthday present by updating this story? ...please? My birthday's on the 23rd of July. :) I would really appreciate it.
| StarInk10 chapter 2 . 7/17/2011
This. Is. AMAZING.
You nailed the characters perfectly; the dialogue and actions are flawless,and the descriptions are rich in detail and emotion.
Please update soon!
| Delfinos chapter 2 . 7/8/2011
Aww, this is SO good so far! I really like your writing style & sentence fluency, it comes together very nicely, and dont worry, GlaDOS was perfect! I also like the way the plot is going. I nearly started crying when Wheatley was whizzed off into space, so its awesome to see a AU where that doesn't happen, yay! Can't wait until your next update! D
| Yunyin chapter 2 . 7/6/2011
I was going through the stories I have on alert here, and I re-read this one. Boy, I hope you write more soon! I think you have a good grasp on Wheatley and GLaDOS, and I'm really eager to see what happens next. :)
| Coryx chapter 2 . 7/2/2011
It's not been updated for a month. That makes me sad. Are you still writing, or is it consigned to the the fires of eternal WIP-dom?