Reviews for like a whisper in the wind
LovelySocks chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
For some reason, I've always loooved Percy's daughters.
'she's done
done with feeling judged
done with feeling weak
done with wanting to give up
[done with it all, darling]'
I find this stanza paticuarly well-written. I think there's a bit of Lucy inside all of us, and I love the language you used, with straight-to-the-point-but-somehow-still-vague-metaphors and a lovely beat to it. Beautiful job, and amazing last line.
Gryffindorable chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
I really like this.
Selenehekate chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
Wow, I really love this poem, The way you formatted it is amazing, and I enjoy your characterization of Lucy (though it's admittedly quite different from my characterization of her in my oneshot A Challenge of Epic Proportions, lol). I love the overall theme of this poem, and I think it's quite beautiful. I especially love the beginning lines. Great job!
a walk on the w i l d side chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
I love this, it's beautiful. I love the simplicity

~thrown into the background

(but since when had she ever been important?)

~[not every fairy tale has a happy ending, darling]

I love those lines, they really are fantastic. I love the emotion and the...everything, darling.

BlueEyes444 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
FHTHDOFNFNF Mad! This was flipping fantastic, I tell you, flipping fantastic! :D
HollytheKitty chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
Really good! I write (not to mention love) free verse too, and I rarely see it on FF.
chkn chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
I don't know what Janey's freeverses, but that was bloody brilliant. :)
kingslayers chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
Miss Madderbear, you have no freaking idea how much I loved that.

1) I felt that your use of the formatting options available was very skillful, and very interesting. I officially love your freeverse. Way to put mine to shame. Gosh.

2) Angst. I have an angst twin. You read my MollyScorpRose. You know I have issues to the extent that I (try to, anyway) write angst. I really enjoyed this, Madders :)

It felt so believable, and so... Relatable, I guess.

3) Lucy. I love Lucy. She is officially my favorite Next Gen behind James, and just in front of Rose. I'm serious, I adore her. My first attempt at a long oneshot freeverse thing was using her.

But whatever. I really liked this, and I feel Lucy is the forgotten Weasley sometimes.

Honestly, Miss Madderbear, I really enjoyed this. I love Lucy, but I also loved the ending you gave :)

It kind of reminds me of my failed Scrominique ((at least it was literal ScRoMinique, not ScorDom P)). Except yours is better.

Way to put my freeverses to shame.

Janey xxxxx
folie a plusieurs chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
/is a true friend :D

Love you Maddy-kins ;P

And I love this! It's so beautful and agnsty and I just love it, alright? :D