|Reviews for like a whisper in the wind|
| LovelySocks chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
For some reason, I've always loooved Percy's daughters.
done with feeling judged
done with feeling weak
done with wanting to give up
[done with it all, darling]'
I find this stanza paticuarly well-written. I think there's a bit of Lucy inside all of us, and I love the language you used, with straight-to-the-point-but-somehow-still-vague-metaphors and a lovely beat to it. Beautiful job, and amazing last line.
| Gryffindorable chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
I really like this.
| Selenehekate chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
Wow, I really love this poem, The way you formatted it is amazing, and I enjoy your characterization of Lucy (though it's admittedly quite different from my characterization of her in my oneshot A Challenge of Epic Proportions, lol). I love the overall theme of this poem, and I think it's quite beautiful. I especially love the beginning lines. Great job!
| a walk on the w i l d side chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
I love this, it's beautiful. I love the simplicity
~thrown into the background
(but since when had she ever been important?)
~[not every fairy tale has a happy ending, darling]
I love those lines, they really are fantastic. I love the emotion and the...everything, darling.
| BlueEyes444 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
FHTHDOFNFNF Mad! This was flipping fantastic, I tell you, flipping fantastic! :D
| HollytheKitty chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
Really good! I write (not to mention love) free verse too, and I rarely see it on FF.
| oh finnick chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
I don't know what Janey's freeverses, but that was bloody brilliant. :)
| kingslayers chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
Miss Madderbear, you have no freaking idea how much I loved that.
1) I felt that your use of the formatting options available was very skillful, and very interesting. I officially love your freeverse. Way to put mine to shame. Gosh.
2) Angst. I have an angst twin. You read my MollyScorpRose. You know I have issues to the extent that I (try to, anyway) write angst. I really enjoyed this, Madders :)
It felt so believable, and so... Relatable, I guess.
3) Lucy. I love Lucy. She is officially my favorite Next Gen behind James, and just in front of Rose. I'm serious, I adore her. My first attempt at a long oneshot freeverse thing was using her.
But whatever. I really liked this, and I feel Lucy is the forgotten Weasley sometimes.
Honestly, Miss Madderbear, I really enjoyed this. I love Lucy, but I also loved the ending you gave :)
It kind of reminds me of my failed Scrominique ((at least it was literal ScRoMinique, not ScorDom P)). Except yours is better.
Way to put my freeverses to shame.
| folie a plusieurs chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
/is a true friend :D
Love you Maddy-kins ;P
And I love this! It's so beautful and agnsty and I just love it, alright? :D