|Reviews for The Rise of Jose Flores|
| Madame Apathy chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
Not bad. It's quite concise, which is good for me. The only thing I noticed is that the profile's been typed out twice, but save that you're good. Can't see any Sues. :)
Knowing you, there'll be plenty of action later on, which I'll look forward to seeing.