Reviews for Sozin's comet part four: Avatar Aang
Kira97 chapter 1 . 4/3/2013
awwww! loved it! specially those last words
keep doing these!
Evil.VS.Waffles chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
He, I loved this extention. Great job, made me laugh at the end. Great job at keeping them in character at the end, it can be hard, huh? lol I loved it. You kept the fluff just right, not going too overboard or suddenly stopping. Just right.
arizony chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
crush-kataang,

You have a great basis for a much longer story here. I would like to suggest you read it through as if it were an outline and consider how you can flesh it out, using the outline you have so wonderfully written. There is so much here which you can build upon. Good job!

-arizony-
Syzeria chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
When I ignore the fact that Aang is a monk and monk's never ever ever kiss, I can really appreciate the ending. I find the series ended with too much clashing, plot holes, etc. However, you made it so light and happy that I don't mind it as much.

When writing dialogue, I find it better to add a period after the speech of person A, so that person B's reaction is more prominent and it doesn't look like person B was doing the talking all along.

The last line about the tunnel was brilliant :) I loved season 2 so much 3