|Reviews for Sonic the Hedgehog: Attorney of Law|
| Tairulz chapter 37 . 3/8
OOOOOOOhhhh! They finally got him! Yay go sonic and co. This is an excellent story i can't wait to see what happens next :D
| werewolf lover99 chapter 37 . 3/8
I really thought it was a very interesting chapter.
| DanceDream chapter 37 . 3/8
Wow. Sonic, you brilliant little...! What an ending! What a case! Gah, Sonic's gonna go prematurely gray if he keeps this up! And so will I! Mephiles was certainly one sly little devil, but thank goodness it looks like he's finally, FINALLY admitting defeat. Sonic gets to keep the title of the most stubborn guy in the series, I guess. :)
You've done a spectacular job with this mystery; I personally couldn't write a decent mystery to save my life. Everything works out wonderfully, and you have all kinds of nice little anecdotes pertaining to Sonic - between Mephiles's cunning, Vector's willingness to put his precious reputation on the line for the sake of justice, Tails being the brains behind Sonic but Sonic still being no box of rocks himself... The list goes on. It's a surprisingly gripping, entertaining read for it being not action-packed like most Sonic stories.
That's really all I have time to say, except thank goodness at least part of it is over! Thanks for putting all that effort into making the story what it is, and happy writing! Great chapter, as always!
| werewolf lover99 chapter 36 . 11/27/2013
I really enjoy this story & i hope you feel better & have a very Happy Thanksgiving.
| Tairulz chapter 36 . 11/27/2013
Yay i liked it! can't wait to see what happens next :D
| werewolf lover99 chapter 35 . 11/2/2013
This story has a lot of wonderful twists & turns. I am Howling! loving it.
| werewolf lover99 chapter 34 . 10/16/2013
I think that Sonic & his gang are in hot water even though we know Mephiles is basically the worst person as a witness but what i really want to know is, Who do you think is right or wrong?
| bearvalley3365 chapter 33 . 9/10/2013
That is a really interesting chapter.
| bearvalley3365 chapter 2 . 9/1/2013
I knew Tails was not charged with murder.
| bearvalley3365 chapter 1 . 9/1/2013
This is a very interesting chapter.
| Ghostkid33 chapter 31 . 1/19/2013
WHOA! Mephiles is the culprit?! Who would've guessed? No wonder his profile seemed so suspicious to everybody! That explains why he's such a jerk and why the Sonic gang doesn't like him! I KNEW THAT WHOLE "UNDEFEATED PROSECUTOR" REPUTATION HE HELD WAS TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE! Even I was shocked at the end of the chapter! That really WAS a jaw-dropper! lol I can totally imagine all the WTF faces the rest of the characters are holding right now. Now I'm hyped up for what happens next! Please bring on the next chapter! I wanna read what's gonna happen with Mephiles!
| Spike Brigadier chapter 30 . 1/13/2013
Wow! First thing I'm going to say here is that you're a very good writer, and that I love this portrayal of these characters!
Secondly, the cases clearly have a lot of thought put into them, and the characters all retain a mysterious side, and you don't know who you can trust. And I most certainly believe that adds rather than detracts from the story.
Keep up the awesome work!
| Ghostkid33 chapter 29 . 11/23/2012
Hmmm I see you changed the title of your fanfic. So prosecution and defense is working together for the first time to unravel the five-year-old LK-9 case. This oughta be interesting. I just hope Vector is able to get Salemand into the court by fifteen minutes or else the whole gang is screwed. I can't wait to see how this will turn out!
| Princess Toady chapter 27 . 11/23/2012
Nice way to introduce the LK-9 incident, I was kind of curious to be fair because I was wondering why Mephiles wasn't objecting much. Now I know why, he wasn't privy to the case, so I suppose he couldn't know the details about it and couldn't prosecute it once again. However it did appear suspicious to me how he didn't put up much of a fight, if he is working in cahoots with the mastermind behind the murders...
My first logical conclusion would be that he thought nobody would be able to open the case's dossier again, simply because no one knew the details... But surely, Espio must have told the group of Vector's and Silver's investigations (which would explain why Silver almost died when the chameleon robbed Ms. Rose of her life) and that kind of contradicts my initial thought... Very curious.
I don't really mind an information overload as your very clear with your descriptions and take the time to actually put the clues found by the investigation team in your chapters. Not many people do it, and it's kind of a shame because I really enjoy the details one puts in their story.
And you managed to make me think about the gun. I was wondering why Mephiles had not brought that fact up yet. :p
| Princess Toady chapter 26 . 11/22/2012
I suppose the loophole created by Interpol was the fact that Shadow's fingerprints were located on both guns, even though that's impossible because he only had one of them in his hand, never went inside the lighthouse and never touched a gun before in his life. This is the only thing I can think of right now and I hope I'm right.
The chapters where Sonic indicts someone for a crime are always intense. I very much like the effort put in the indiction, it really sums up everything that has happened so far and is well constructed. But the ending of this chapter kind of seems like Gourd Lake's murder. However, with Interpol in this and a few more characters who have yet to reveal all they know about the case, I'm thinking that it won't be the same at all after all.
Max was pretty dumb to admit to having seen the beige bag full of bricks before. Why would such an intelligent man make such a blatant mistake ? Lol
And I like the moment when Sonic had to drag the bag inside the courtroom. I was smiling as I imagined him doing so.