|Reviews for The Punishment|
| bleachjenlove chapter 18 . 3/7
NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! not more chatarz? What do:( this makes Jen sad! Love the story please give an update happy to how you are doing? _
| Part 2 maybe chapter 18 . 3/4
This was an AMAZING fanfiction could you make part 2 I want to know more about it?
| Inferna Blossom chapter 5 . 2/28
I don't blame Chell for slapping him. I know that, as far as his memory goes, he's only been around Chell for a day, but that was not ok. His reaction to being able to give her food was cute. And him wanting to sleep near her is cute too, but I hope Chell isn't pissed when she wakes up. I know I wouldn't react well to waking up with someone suddenly being right up against me, especially someone who I hadn't know *that* well.
| Inferna Blossom chapter 4 . 2/28
I loved the scene between Chell and Wheatley.
| Inferna Blossom chapter 3 . 2/28
While I find it cute that he finds Chell attractive, I felt really awkward reading about Wheatley jerk-off. And this oes confirm my suspisions that, in Portal 2, he was getting off on us solving his tests.
| Inferna Blossom chapter 2 . 2/28
The part where he discovered his reflection in the mirror was hilarious. And poor Wheatley, I bet you're not that unattractive. Certainly not ugly.
| Inferna Blossom chapter 1 . 2/28
All of them? Not just the cores, not just the ores and the cubes, but all of them?! That's horrible! And yet...it makes sense. At first I was wondering how this could be a worse punishment, but between the pain and the testing, I see it now. All though, if he meets Chell again, then I believe that what GLaDOS intended as punishment could turn out for good.
| bleachjenlove chapter 13 . 2/27
Oh God...oh God..ohgodohgodohgodohgod! I thought the hallway chapter was good AWWHH LAWWDDD! I think this is one of those stories o read twice _ amazing
| migratingcrane chapter 1 . 12/29/2013
OH MY GOD. THIS IS ABSOLUTELY PERFECT. (FANGIRLING TO THE MAX) PERFECT. JUST PERFECT.
| Taylornwinky chapter 13 . 10/14/2013
GLaDOS: O.O WHAT. JUST. HAPPENED. I- I- *malfunctions* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA- *emergency shutdown*
| Guest chapter 15 . 9/22/2013
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| PenguinGirl470 chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
I love this story! :,)
| Shatteredstar666 chapter 18 . 9/1/2013
*dies from epicness*
| Keighlyn chapter 18 . 8/20/2013
Epic! I can't wait until you write the next chapter!s !
| singertobe chapter 18 . 8/18/2013
Please write more!