Reviews for The doctrine of love
Guest chapter 1 . 3/23
its cute that your making a happy ending for her!
Guest chapter 8 . 6/4/2013
AHH! FINALLY AN UPDATE! love the story btw
nichole chapter 6 . 9/25/2012
still no update T_T
nichole chapter 6 . 9/7/2012
please update!
AnimegirlTohru chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
Hey this is pretty good. It's nice to see Kurumi's POV.
nichole chapter 6 . 7/26/2012
whats next! LOL
nichole chapter 4 . 7/26/2012
oh, i've always wanted something sweet for ume too. the story is so nice.
MiHaRu96 chapter 6 . 7/4/2011
Sweet :) Finally the others will know that they are a couple soon. :D

Wonder if Kazehaya and the others will be shocked? :O

Nice chapter. Update soon! :D
rnn21 chapter 6 . 7/3/2011
Cute chapter, she really seems to care about him.
rnn21 chapter 5 . 7/1/2011
Hey, i've recently started reading this story and i'm really liking it.

Keep up the good work.
Miyano Ran chapter 3 . 5/14/2011
Grammar check :)

took a deep breathe (remove the 'e' from breathe)

is ok- it's ok

How could be Sawako (exchange the two words 'be' and 'sawako')

Not having friends it makes me sad. - either.

not having friends makes me sad,

or,

not having friends... It makes me sad!

)

TYPO! I though I (add 't' to though)

you won't found- change to 'find'

couldn't found- it's FIND :P

awwwww shuchks, really sweet chapter! :D update soon!
Miyano Ran chapter 2 . 5/14/2011
of course dear, it's perfectly okay to make mistakes :D even I suck in English.. neither it is my mother tongue wahahaha :D but, I still enjoy your work! And I'll try to correct the mistakes I spot! ) oh..and flows.. should be flaws.. you were trying to say that you have 'mistakes'...as 'flaws' )

OMG! Kurumi's STEP MOM . where's her REAL mom? poor girl... DIVORCED. oh wow... that sucks for kurumi. she should've lived with her mum instead

I felt as a coward.. preferably you use 'like' than 'as'

I looked in the mirror. 'in' should be 'at' :)

I like the name Nana :)) cute!

marrying him should be 'her' LOL

look on the window 'on' should be 'out'

in disunite them 'disuniting' :)

THIS IS EXCITING! :D go write more :)
Miyano Ran chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
nice and enjoyable chapter! very sweet oh..for some grammatical corrections :)

smiling 'to' should be 'at'

"I was afraid he will go away from me"..add "that" between afraid and he.

"relationship as theirs." 'as' should be changed to 'like' it sounds better... :)

there was not Kazehaya 'not' should be 'no'

what means my life without him? -this line is wrong.. it should be 'what would my life mean without him?'

I didn't cared. must be 'cared'

you weather it matches.. 'weather' should be 'whether' )

very interesting new guy 3
MiHaRu96 chapter 3 . 5/14/2011
Wow... I like their cute little meeting... :D They are, well so cute together. Pls update soon. :D
MiHaRu96 chapter 2 . 5/8/2011
Wow... I certainly looking forward to the next chapter to know how Kurumi and the Rei is related... Haha... Will be looking forward to the next weekend where you might post up the new chapter. :D
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