|Reviews for Balto McCormick|
| Invisi-Camryn chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
I like it a lot so far. I personally, 3 constructive critisim, so after looking carefully for some advice to give, I decided that Balto is a bit too rebellious, close to being sterotyped (but she isn't, don't worry) and she should have a girly moment (like get a makeover from Ariel, like people have been saying) This story is wonderful though, and I had to look VERY close for that microscopic flaw.
| footlooseologist06 chapter 4 . 5/16/2012
This is really good! Balto should fall in love with one of the guys she works with and she shud have a make over from Ariel. Ariel should really bond with balto and they should have a moment together where some emotional stuff should come out. Please continue!
| Archdruid89 chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
I'm now starting to see if this movie was made where Ren actually DID have a sister in Footloose (in another life, of course), I know JUST the person who can play her- Linda Blair.
| Archdruid89 chapter 2 . 2/6/2012
I can almost see how Balto dressing like Bryan Adams and wearing a baseball cap backwards seems a little reminiscent of Alex Mack to me. And it's really cute how her name would imply on how she ate a chicken leg like a dog.
I also think it would have been more interesting if you wrote that the cop called Ren "a little shit" instead of "boy" where they were pulled over by those fuckers.
| Gryffindor 20 chapter 4 . 11/30/2011
AWESOME chapter please update soon thanx D i think later in the chapters have Balto get a whole new make over from Ariel and Rusty.
| RolliePollie chapter 3 . 10/20/2011
can't wait to read some more :)
| Gryffindor 20 chapter 3 . 10/16/2011
I LOVE THIS STORY please update soon thanx D
| xSyNyStErX chapter 3 . 10/9/2011
hurry up and write more!
| xXx AJO xXx chapter 2 . 8/23/2011
I like it a lot I really like sidter fics keep up the good work
| Feel the Steel chapter 2 . 8/16/2011
I'm really enjoying this story so far. You've kept Ren perfectly in character, and Balto is so well written that I can actually imagine her having a part in the movie itself.
I can't wait for another chapter