|Reviews for Auracian Legacy: Legend of Solace|
| Tina chapter 2 . 1/26
You should rewrite this story and make more lighthearted. Same lightheartedness as the canon series. Because of the new changes to the Pokemon franchise like Kalos you should do the rewrite to make this story interesting again and stick to 2 companions progainst in the story.
| WereDragon EX chapter 17 . 8/12/2016
Admittedly, this does seem a bit like filler, but good job on it nonetheless. Looking forward to reading more of this story.
| WereDragon EX chapter 15 . 10/26/2014
I apologize for the late review, I'm been terribly busy. Well, anyway, this was a neat update, nice job. So we get to see Hope again and it looks like she's going to join Nathen's group again. Interesting. Looks like Gem is still having nightmares. Is the woman and child in Gemma's watch, Gemma and maybe a possible child of Nathen and Gemma in the future? Huh, looks like Maria has a crush on Markus, not surprising on the whole. And it looks like TUA will continue to be a threat again, well, looking forward to seeing what happens next, so do update soon.
| Slenderbrine chapter 6 . 7/10/2014
I was trying to fill this out when my thumb skipped onto the post button. This is the real OC form.
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Name: Kapablo Forto (cah-PAHB-low FOR-tow)
Nickname: Pablo (call him that to annoy him)
Hometown: Violet City
Appearance: jet black hair, broken green eyes, paler-than-normal skin, muscular and fit, 6'2", 210lbs.
Clothes: unzipped black jacket over a bright gray t-shirt, black cargo pants, black leather shoes, and an "R" with a slash through it over his heart on the jacket.
Occupation: Dark Light Commander
Personality: Dark and cold, constantly trying to please the Dark Light leader. He's quick and efficient, but will freeze up if someone mentions TEAM ROCKET.
Talents: Torturing, hurting, killing
•Family Member - Name - Status - (Cause if Dead) - Description
•Mom - Grace Forto - Dead - (Heart Attack) - She had green, hopeful eyes and long, flowing blond hair. She wore dresses of all kinds because she thought she looked prettier in them.
•Dad - John Bentley - Dead - (Murder by Son) - Kapablo cares not to remember him.
•Brother - Cerbo Forto (SEHR-boh FOR-tow) - Alive - Short blond hair, ice blue eyes, and Giovanni's Top Commander. The brothers hate each other, but will not kill each other. They're the last of the Forto Family.
Friends: His Pokémon.
Species - Nickname - Item - Moves - Best Quality - Worst Quality
Castform - Vintro - NeverMelt_Ice - Hail, Future Sight, Hidden Power, Hydro Pump, Weather Ball - Special Attack - Defense
Durant - Gray - Rocky Helmet - Iron Defense, Iron Head, Dig, X-Scissor, Guillotine (1-Hit KO) - Attack - Speed
Mirrird - Dark Ice - Quick Claw - Agility, Quick Attack, Sheer Cold, Ice Beam, Night Shade - Speed - Special Defense (Think about it. If a bird needs illusions to hide from far away, it must have a low Special Defense)
Deveon - Lucifer - Hell Chain (a chain collar made of obsidian that boosts the power of Hell-Types) - Fire Blast, Swift, Fire Fang, Bite, Demon Tongue (a move only for Hell-Types. It is a like Sing, but sound is described as creepy and demonic. Pokémon who hear it flinch and have a 50/50 chance of becoming either confused or paralyzed. However, it does as much damage as a Signal Beam) - Special Attack - Defense
Tech: gray X-Transceiver
Goals: Dark Light domination over Solace & to kick his brother's ass.
Crush: He cares for nothing but Dark Light and his Pokémon.
Kapablo Forto had a decent childhood. He had a nice mom and brother and went to a good school. However, John, the dad, left as soon as the fraternal twins were born. So, out of spite and anger, Kapablo and Cerbo became the Johto Battle School Bullies. They bullied ALL of the kids, but the adults, including Grace, were none the wiser.
By the time the Forto Twins were 18, there family was dead broke. So, they joined something they were good at for money: Team Rocket. The two of them climbed the ranks until one mission.
They were supposed to steal some Slowpoke tails. Something simple, but then some kid came. His name was Red. He beat Kapablo, but his Pokémon were weak after the battle, so Cergo defeated him and they all hightailed out of there. In shame of being defeated by a child, Kapablo was kicked back to being a grunt. So, he left Team Rocket for a group that was recruiting members of other teams: Team Dark Light.
Kapablo gave away valuable Team Rocket Information and rooted out two Rocket spies in the organization. He eventually made his way to Commander, where he now resides. He captured two Pokémon in the Solace region and named them. They were the closest things to friends in Dark Light.
| Slenderbrine chapter 4 . 7/9/2014
An OC most likely unlike any other that has been submitted...
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Name: Kapablo Forto
Nickname: Pablo (call him that to annoy him)
Hometown: (Town or City, Region) If from a Fan Made Region, please give a brief description of home location.
Appearance: (What do they look like?)
Clothes: (What do they wear?)
Occupation: (Trainer, Coordinator, Breeder, Researcher, Designer, Etc.)
Personality: (What are they like? Please give a brief detailed description if able,)
Talents: (What are they good at? Ex. Cooking and Medicine)
Family: (Living and dead (If any), also give a brief description for each member.)
Friends: (Who does this person know? Give brief description of where and how they met and how close they were as friends, No limit to friends, could be friends with actual series characters or with other fiction characters)
Pokémon: (If 10, maximum of 2 Pokémon, If older any 6 from any region, Please give nature and a list of up to 5 moves.)
Future Pokémon: (Evolutions, Eggs, Captures, Trades (Give description of how trade transpires), gifts (Tell who gave the Pokémon.)
Tech: (Tell what kind of Technology the person has. i.e. Pokétch, PokéGear, Xtransciever, etc.)
Goals: (What do they strive for?)
Crush: (Optional, if one is present then tell me who you want, or give a description in what you're looking for in your significant other,)
| Slenderbrine chapter 5 . 7/9/2014
Nathen reminds me of those Jubelife clowns in Pokemon Diamon, Pearl, and Platinum
| Slenderbrine chapter 3 . 7/9/2014
/CITY OC FORM/
Name: Malvarma Town; Prison of Daemonigon
Place in Region: North East area
Malvarma Town is a relatively large town built in a frozen valley in the middle of the Lunar Mountains. In the center of said town is a frozen lake, called Malvarma Lake, that is two feet thick with ice. Fisherman can't cut holes in the lake, for done reason. Pokémon attacks do nothing, leaving a myth that the ice is magical, and anyone with a piece of it would have extremely good luck for the rest of their days.
In the center of the lake is a shrine to the Pokémon God of Destruction, Daemonigon, for letting the fires burn and not destroying the town. This shrine is exactly the same shape as the Celebi Shrine, but black instead of white, with a blood red roof. It is kept off limits to all foreigners, as only those who lived in the town for five years can approach it. Hell-Type Pokémon are common near it.
The town rings around the Lake. Every house is made of an elegant combination of snow and smooth stone, with windows of clear ice. All around the town are iron braziers that will keep people from out of town warm.
At the South End of the town is a five-story wooden lodge. The first floor is a Pokécenter, the second floor is a Pokémart, and the 3rd - 5th floors are rooms rented out for people from out of town.
Each house is one-story with stone walls and a slanted roof made of hard ice. The roofs, though slanted, normally have snow settled on top. The front door is an oak wood door with a slot for mail. There is a window to the left of the door and one in the back. The front of every house is decorated with a different ice sculpture of a Pokémon, usually Ice-Types. Mayor Richards, however, has a Pokéball, but with good reason. The inside of every house is a TV, a table, a wood-fire stove/hearth in the middle of the room, and as many cots as people for the room. The floor is smooth stone.
At the North End is a wooden conference building and a GIGANTIC cleared out field for the Annual Ice Sculpting Contest (or AISC).
There are two ways to get to this town. Either climb the Lunar Mountains, which is a death wish and filled with Heaven-Type and Ice-Type Pokémon, or through the Lunar Tunnel, easier and filled with Ice-, Dark-, and Hell-Types.
There is a total population of 26 people in the town and the current Mayor is Charlie Richards. Depending on who is the Mayor, his/her lawn sculpture will be a Pokéball. A new Mayor is elected every four years. This is Mayor Richards' second year.
Myth 1: The Malvarma Lake is frozen solid because it is not a lake at all. In fact, it is the prison of Daemonigon, a cell of heavenly ice the Hellish Pokémon cannot break. The ice will break only when Armageddon comes or when Angealagon needs his help. Even after that, Angealagon will force Daemonigon back in his prison and reseal it.
Myth 2: The ice is an ancient ancestor of what we know as NeverMelt_Ice. If even the smallest chip is given to an Ice-Type, that Pokémon's power will teach Legendary levels. Foreigners always come to break the ice, but to no avail
Contest: Annual Ice Sculpting Contest
Year of Contest in Story: 49th
1) You must choose what you will sculpt before you actually do it.
2) You may not sculpt yourself. You are to order your Pokémon to do it.
3) There are Ice-Type Pokémon on standby if you want to redo or fill in a crack.
4) There are points based on how long you take, how many commands are used, visual appeal, and if you need to do it over again.
5) You may not use your own Ice-Type Pokémon.
6) Only teams every 25 years (25th Contest, 50tg, 75th, etc.)
7) Lowest amount of points wins
8) a. NO SPECIAL COMMANDS! If a trainer says one command and the Pokémon finishes the entire thing, it is a disqualification.
b. However, a Trainer can practice for maximum efficiency before hand.
9) There is a Maximum Time Limit of 3 Hours.
10) All trainers must start together.
11) A block of ice 4ft x 4ft x 6ft will be provided.
-Every 5 seconds
-Fill in crack
-Taking longer than 3 hrs.
-Starting before the start.
(1)-(10) for Visual Appeal
(1 is best, 10 is worst)
-Breaking the Rules
-Teams When Not Specified
-Trainer Physically Sculpting
Pokémon Around Town: Frostark, Krystoid, Cyger
Other: That ice is literally unbreakable. If you do include this town in your story, DO NOT, PLEASE, give any character a piece if the ice. If you choose Myth 1 & 2 aren't myths and one of the ice shards of the broken cell comes into a character's possession, fine. But other then that, NO ONE can have a piece. But there CAN be forgeries ;)
| Slenderbrine chapter 2 . 7/9/2014
I'm sorry, instead of Castform, it's Frostark and could you change the moves? My mind was other places when typing that...
| Slenderbrine chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
If you're still accepting OCs, here's one:
Name: Daniel Snell
Nickname(s): Danny; Thunder
Hometown: Eterna City, Sinnoh
Appearance: tanned skin, turquoise eyes, dirty blonde hair, a bit scarred on the knees, wears rounded-rectangular brown glasses.
Clothes: light gray jacket over a plain white t-shirt, loose blue jeans, white socks, black running sneakers, and a plain black cap he got from his grandpa.
Personality: Confident, brave, humorous, slightly untrusting, and kind; serious and strategic in battle, though
Talents: Fishing (Expert) & Cooking
Relation - Name - Status - Desc.
Dad - Dan Snell - Alive(?) - Anandoned family when Danny was 2
Mom- Holly Malen Snell - Deceased - Died of cancer when Danny was 5
Grandpa (Pa) - Russell Malen- Alive - Guardian of Danny
Friends: eventually friends with the main character, but doesn't travel with him. Occasionally crosses paths with him.
Pokémon - Nickname - Gender - Held Item - Moveset - Info
Ampharos - Amps - Male - Ampharite - Cotton Spore, Signal Beam, Discharge, Headbutt, Hyper Beam - Starter Pokemon (Mareep)
Rotom - Virus - None - Reaper_Cloth - Ominous Wind, Discharge, Hydro Pump, Thunder, Confuse Ray - Gift from Pa & permanently stuck in Washer Form
Castform - Vintro - Male - NeverMelt_Ice - Hail, Future Sight, Hydro Pump, Future Sight, Hidden Power- loves snow and was caught in a snowy area
Goals: To become an unbeatable trainer & to be friends with his Pokémon.
Crush: Think "Brock", but slightly toned down to the point where he is not a total annoyance to girls.
Back-story: Daniel "Danny" Snell was born to Holly Malen Snell and Dan Snell on September 5th. For unexplained reasons, Dan Snell left Holly and Danny when Danny was only two, giving him slight trust issues. Holly herself died when Danny was five, so he went to live with his grandpa, Russell Malen, who he calls Pa.
On his eighth birthday, Pa gave Danny a Rotom, which Danny nicknamed "Virus". This Rotom, however, was for some reason stuck in washer form, so it's permanently an Electric/Water Pokémon. When he was 13, he decided to start a journey to become the greatest trainer ever, so he headed to Sandgem Town and got his starter: Mareep, who he nicknamed "Amps".
However, even throughout beating the Pokémon League, he never got any other Pokémon. Just Amps and Virus. He became known as Thunder because of his two powerful Electric Pokémon. So, he wanted a new challenge and headed off to the Solace Region to try and take on that League.
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
Sorry, KQ is a breeder, explorer, and trainer
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
I like this story, and i would like to submit an OC. My guys name is Kevin Quinn and his nickname is KQ or Kev. He is 14 yrs old and is from Strike City. He is 5'2/5'3 with lots of freckles and piercing blue eyes. He wears shorts all the time, a blue shirt and a hat he can't go anywhere without. He is an extremely athletic but also very smart. Kevin has an Electivire that knows Brick Break, Ice Punch, Wild Charge and Thunder. also has an Espeon that is bold that knows Future Sight, Physic, Shadow Ball, and Signal Beam. Lastly he has a Charizard(starter) nicknamed Inferno that knows Blast Burn, Heat Wave, Dragon Pulse, and fly. He is a lone wolf, but his extremely funny and sociable. His goals are to explore the world and become the strongest he can be. He doesn't like to talk about his family or past. He has a celebrity crush on Cynthia( but is kinda like Brock) and his future pokemon are up to you. He has a poketch and an xtransevier. He is friends with everyone he meets. If you like this Oc post it in the authors notes and could you also please post a update schedule
| JaysonFour chapter 11 . 6/3/2014
This is a non-story chapter, which breaks the rules of fanfiction dot net. Have you thought about perhaps moving it into your profile, or somewhere else? It just can't stand on its own in a chapter because there's no story material in it.
The interactivity also violates the rules- have you thought about having the forms on your profile and having people PM the ideas in to you?
JaysonFour of Critics United
| Torchix chapter 15 . 6/3/2014
A great chapter as usual, good to see it updated again :) Buuuut I do wish I could punch Braylen in the face. Seriously.
I know a bit about what might be going on in some of this but I'll not say :P Its all good though! Update something again soon I hope
| Mari chapter 14 . 10/26/2012
Late reveiw... Sorry for that.
Anyways, I know you're probably busy or you don't feel like writing and whatnot, but this was a nice little fluff in the story. Took a while, but I guess it's always worth the wait.
I continue to look forward to the next chapters, and I'll always support you!
| WereDragon EX chapter 14 . 9/3/2012
Well, I have to say that this was a fine chapter. I did not really get the first part of the chapter, though it has been mentioned a few times in the first fic that Gem is of value to a villanous team. Well, thre is a nice small interlude at the school, though I wonder what Carmen is doing there. Who is the person watching Carmen in her room? Admittably, that feels rather creepy. Then again, the idea of the Spirisp following people also feels that way. Anyway, I felt that you did a fine job so far with the OC history I passed you. Looks like TJ and Nevee would be travelling in the group for a while then. I suppose that the characters in the last part of the chapter are OCs from the first story? Anyway, a nice little piece this chapter was, do update soon.