|Reviews for Fribble|
| MyDark-Sunshine chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
That moment when Shura was actually spot-on about Mephisto's plan on taking over his father's throne and just want to jump into the story and tell her. HAHA. XD
I like this story, especially the ending. Though there were some words here that didn't actually make any sense (Sorry. I'm kind of a grammar-nazi; though I'm not perfect myself.) for you to use in a particular sentence. But all in all, it was good. Nice job! :D
| ariedling chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
i love it.
| Midnightpintowolf chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
SO Freaking adorable! I wish you'd continue with it!
| SuperiorDimwit chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
Whenever "first [xxx] fic" pops up in the description field I get wary... But this was really good. A neat, laid-back drabble for two laid-back characters, and a good take on their respective personalities. It's so nice to find these one shots about nothing in particular, almost feels like a behind-the-scenes shot of how they "really" are in private. Love the banter, it's just what they would be doing! And thank you for keeping Mephisto's gentlemanly (albeit dubious) demeanor. It's so easy to forget that he calls and carries himself like one, in between the outbreaks of clownery and devilry... Perfect finish with Shura's musing on his true intentions.
I like your language, too. Not too elaborate, not too vernacular, just flowing and natural. Only thing I might want to criticize is, as Rika the Strange pointed out, incarnate rather than reincarnated. And I think Mephisto turns into a west highland white terrier (what I've interpreted from his looks, at least). Also, and I think you should ignore me on this; I think Mephisto can catch cold, or at least get symptoms like runny nose (given his allergy to dirty things in the impure king arc).
All in all, really good work! (I faved it, couldn't help myself, it gave such a nice feeling.)
| Damuzachi chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
Very well done
-Enjoyed it very much
| T420000 chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
I really like your stories. I wish their was more on Amaimon though he is my favorite.
| Addicted-to-GazettE chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
Mephisto is one of my favorite characters for the sheer fact that he's so quirky. You caputed both characters wonderfully, and despite the fact that you left out the slang the translators gave Shura, I think you caputured her perfectly. Poor Shura, she doesn't seem at all happy with her cold.
And I dont really ship anyone from this series really, but I have to admit, those two make a wonderful comic duo. : )
| Meavsy chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
That was so cute! I loved this so much. Awesome job. :]
| Ash chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
D very well written, i liked it very much.
| sama-chan chapter 1 . 8/12/2011
That was cute in its own way. I really enjoyed it.
| Swift-Star9 chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
I've been following AnE since the beginning, and just decided to check the fanfics now. This is excellent - wonderful characterizations, details are perfect. Definitely Rin releasing the Gorgon was a nice detail. My favorite quote is definitely "scheming against his father, duping the Vatican, and running a school". I like how Shura and Mephisto are at odds with each other, and verbally sparring. I can't think of anything to critique. this was good!
| kaka-chan chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
I thought the characterization was very good! Nice relaxed snapshot of two characters I really like. Hope to see more AnE fic from you :)
| kdandsheela chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
I love how you write the characters! VERY in character! I do hope you write useing them again and maybe something that will come with a plot? Anyways, love it so far. Please continue writing for this series! So far there aren't many good fanfics out there for Blue Exorcist so this was great to read!
| Rika the Strange chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
This was very well written! I think it's a fair representation of both Shura and Mephisto's characters, and how they would interact. Their banter was beautiful! The constant mistrust coupled with grudging almost-fondness on Shura's part was lovely, as was Mephisto's characteristically flippant attitude towards nearly everything. The references Mephisto and Shirou's past together were also great, as was the general use of vocabulary in general. I learned a few new words, but at the same time you didn't appear to be coming off as needlessly verbose. The only suggestion I have is regarding the following sentence: "They were gentlemanly, sure, but they were prevarication reincarnated..." I think it should be "incarnate," not "reincarnated." Otherwise, great job!
| wildkurofang chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
Haha love it you did a good job on the carachters and the scenelay out too! Keep on writing Ao no Exorcist is one of my favorites!