Reviews for Three Grand and a Million Years
lauraxxx chapter 3 . 2/16/2014
So I am literally going to read Jacked like right now.

Loved these three chapters, soooo good. And as always written so well!
Donna Lynn chapter 3 . 11/11/2012
This is another of yours that feds my need for Billy Darley. Love all the stories in this series!
Sparkly Blue Eyes chapter 3 . 5/19/2011
So i'm working my way through and girl I MISSED YA to! :) So to start i am very intrigued now Helen will be making an appearance in freaking awesome and knowing you, you will link her into the story perfectly! :P

Chapter 3 Amazing stuff, the detail you include is just something else...I feel like i'm actually watching this on the Big screen and yes you really are that good :D

It was nice to see Billy taking a moment, this bit 'Even the strongest men needed a moment.' Girl, how very true and you nailed Billy, you nailed all of his emotions for this scene. 'Billy wrinkled his nose and sniffed, keeping his eyes closed as his face tilted to the sky.' The way you describe Billy is just :D :O :D Mind blowing - you do him so freaking well and as always i admire that about your writing.

I smiled at his reaction to another car approaching, always protecting himself! The Darley way :D Helen is awesome, she has such a powerful feeling about her - true competition for our boy Billy! :)

'"Yup. She's got the guts for it." Billy nodded his approval and turned around to lean on the hood.' Her car...drool, what a classic! Have to admire a girl that knows the machine she's driving! Nice tough, a confident car always shows a confident person! My personal fav the Mustang :P You may know it, it has blue and white stripes? ;) HAHA

I liked how he opened up to her a bit, not completely but she was able to deal with that. Mainly because there two very similar people - plus they have that connection, the one where Billy feels comfortable :) Everyone has to have that, we wouldn't be human otherwise... '"I've shown you mine. I wanna see yours." She shouted over her shoulder, making her way towards the black Mustang. Billy snorted and caught up in long strides as she reached his car. She glided her hand over the hood and smiled. He watched her curiously as she traced the scarlet tribal designs with an idle finger.' I WANT TO DO THAT! LUCKY GIRL, Nice writing girl - i can always imagine what your writing and her saying that first bit :D SMILE! double meaning to it me thinks!

Their moment was gone; all that remained was reality. - That bit, so awesome - basically says no matter how bad they want it; their time isn't then! Reality is the lives they are living now - opposites! But im glad she got another piece of that fine man ;) HEHE As always, broken record here - you are an amazing writer and you do a brilliant job everytime! :D xoxo
sunstar234 chapter 3 . 5/15/2011
billy gone somewhere to thinking :)

grrrr so close

i think they will make a sorta good couple if it worn't for the hole gang think:(

very good chapter update soon:)
leeseelee chapter 3 . 5/14/2011
I'm sad this ended but it's a good ending.

I look forward to reading about her in Jacked
xThexFightingxIrishx chapter 3 . 5/14/2011
well this chapter was really informative. it showed more about the characters and their personalities. i was glad to have read it and i REALLY didn't expect the shoutout but thanks SO much dear! i think the chapter was really good. it showed a side of billy that not too many people touch on in their stories. it showed a little of his vulnerable side, something no one ever seems to think he has. and it gave a little more away about helen. it also touched on some of the moments of their past together when they were younger and it was nice to see them share a moment before someone went and ruined it by calling her. but it was nice to see that they still have that respect, a certain level of trust, and an openness with each other. it was a good chapter and i can't wait to read more, especially with that chemistry starting to come into play. ;) he IS billy darley after all! lol.
BloodiedAngel2362 chapter 3 . 5/14/2011
This chapter totally blew my mind. Swear to God. The descriptions of where Billy was and what was going through his mind put me right there with him. And I believe you really nailed what goes on through his head, that in the life he lives silence is golden. He doesn't get much of it but when he does it's priceless to him. This bit right here: Just being alone had given him strength when he'd felt none. No other place could do that for him. A nameless road. That was his salvation.- That was pure WRITING GENIUS! It was simple yet it spoke volumes, moving and heartfelt and just gave this incredible insight into Billy.

I'm really enjoying the conversations between Helen and Billy. You're beautifully conveying the fact that despite being each other's competition they have a respect for each other, the share that special bond from their past, and they understand each other. They aren't going to get all mushy but they have both been through hard times in their lives and it allows them to trust each other.

I really enjoyed when Helen opened up, telling about her reasons for going out there and Billy gave her his. They didn't use a lot of detail, didn't need to, they understood each other.

Excellent chapter girl, just excellent. I'm so excited and intrigued to see where you are going to take this. Can't wait for more!
BloodiedAngel2362 chapter 2 . 5/14/2011
Oh man... Bodie and Billy. The reactions between those two are priceless and you write them so well. Bodie teasing Billy about baking in the sun and not being able to take his shirt off... (needs a moment to drool.) was classic, it had me laughing and grinning.

Helen is continuing to impress me. She is very tough and maybe a little sick but you certainly need that to survive in their world. She is definitely a force to be reckoned with and I can easily see her and being Billy being equal rivals.

I love this flashback because it showed a key point in their history together which gave more insight into their interaction in the first chapter. I really enjoyed how you just had Bodie and Billy watch, staying hidden until the end when Billy walked out and caught her gaze for that brief moment, sheer perfection girl.

Its always great seeing Billy and Bodie younger, seeing little bits and pieces of what made them the men they are today. I'm very excited to see where you're going to take this. Keep up the great work, can't wait to read more.
sunstar234 chapter 2 . 5/11/2011
she is scary(mahaha i love it)

well maybe something happens in her life or her crew all gets murdered and she turns to billy for help?

or she gets jump and ends in the hospital and billy gets mad?

that's all i got sorry :(

amazing chapter:)

update soon if you can think of anything:)
Sparkly Blue Eyes chapter 2 . 5/11/2011




The smile on my face when i saw that you'd updated :) Two words BUCKET CRAZY! I am seriously hooked on anything you write - hit, line and sinker me everytime :P

Sooooooo this my girl was awesome, you portray Billy in the exact way i believe he should be - sadly in the film we never get a glimpse of the body underneath ( but your keeping that when he's out and about & i like it! Shows your keeping him in character and you do that brilliantly with all of his actions and emotions. HAHA This bit: '"Do I look like a beach bum?" He said, pulling his pack of cigarettes out of his pocket. Bodie chuckled and clunked his head on window, blowing smoke up into the air. As Billy was clicking his lighter, he noticed a car pull up down the street.' I don't think i could ever see Billy on a beach sipping pina coladas in a mankini somehow :P And i appreciate that you confirmed this would never happen!

I LOVE Helen (and that nickname...shivers!) If i was a guy (cause naturally i'd be a bad boy!) she'd be my type of girl :P 'The first thing to come into view was a black boot; it was slender, long and had a solid heel that ground into the dirt road beneath it. The figure rose and glinted harshly, a flash of white blinding in the bright sunlight. Billy frowned when he recognized the driver. Helen.' You displayed her in such a powerful way & with the three guys getting out first! Hell yeah now thats something every girl needs to ride around with :D

'She motioned with an arm as she continued to talk and the thugs dragged their victim towards the abandoned building. Helen was done with him; he'd probably squealed seconds into her knife play. Now he was on his way to quick death and a shallow grave.' Now this bit made me smile like an idiot, she's so casual, basically well - get rid of him, I'm on the fucking phone! LOL She rocks and you've invented one hell of a character there! She has so much potential in your plot...

And Billy..."I ain't hidin'. My turf." Bodie shook his head. That sentence just sums him up - If theres one person that isn't going to back down to Helen, it's going to be Billy and i think they'll rival eachother quite nicely!

As always girl you can't put a foot wrong and I LOVE your work, always waiting for the next update - which i hope will be soon! So to finish you keep it harsh, you keep it real - you keep it as it should be and you do it brilliantly! :D xoxo
xThexFightingxIrishx chapter 2 . 5/10/2011
i think this chapter was good. it really showed some history about helen and how billy had never really doubted that she had become what the rumors being spread said about her. he had doubted it at first when she'd brought it up to him in chapter one. but after she went to juvie and came back changed and the rumors were flying, he didn't doubt it. they seem to have a certain respect for each other and know that they both coexist in the same big city. now bodie's learning that the rumors were true and billy is finding out for sure that he might just have some competetion in the big ol' city of boston. so i certainly thought it was interesting and i would read more. i don't really have any ideas yet, but if i think of some, i'll be sure to let you know dear. you're always welcome to message me if you'd like to bounce ideas off of me or need some help brainstorming. if i don't respond right away, i will just as soon as i find out you left me a message.
leeseelee chapter 2 . 5/10/2011
keep em coming
xThexFightingxIrishx chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
i REALLY love this story. helen's character is just brilliant dear! i love how she's so tough and fearless and she never backs down. she also seeks revenge for those that work for her, even though she was out of the money i'm guessing it was also to get even with billy for one of his boys getting violent with one of her girls. still, i think the characters definitely clash, but in a good "i wanna kill you but i wanna fuck you at the same damn time" kind of way. i would really love to see what you do with this if you write more chapters. the option is up to you dear but i just wanted to let you know that i really like this story and i admire the hell out of helen's character. and her being billy's first? well it was sweet, funny as hell, and hot all at the same time. great chapter dear. :D
sunstar234 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
i love it!:)

maybe a new gang come in and targets them both and they have to work together to stop the gang?

hope you make it into a story:)

but anyway i love it!:)
Sparkly Blue Eyes chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
So of course i got the teaser and HAD to read! If there's ever a weakness i would say Billy wins hands down... :) To start your title matches the story perfect - nicely done!

We all know that Billy Darley is a god among men LOL so i am focusing my attention on Helen at the know how much i enjoy reading a strong female character and oh my did you do her right! The look, feel and attitude of that girl would certainly rival Billy... to top it she's running the Hall gang, now thats one tough bitch! I loved how she strolled into the Four Roses, taking Billy on with a knife to the crotch HAHA freaking awesome - now that has to be the only way to threaten such a tough man...

Dog tut tut, beating on one of her girls! I'd be pissed and i hope Billy delivers his own ass kicking to him - like he promised... she was demanding, brave and ruthless but it worked! LOVED: She deserved the authority; she'd earned it like she'd earned her nickname: Hells Gate. Corny as it sounded, once you met the edge of her blade, you could bet you'd soon be seeing Lucifer himself. Very nicely done girl, if theres anyway to describe a girl - it would be like that...

The flashbacks into their past were awesome! Gave an insight into their past and first time (which btw was detailed brilliantly!)... nice to see that back then Billy was considerate of the we know deep down he is right? ;) Okay so i hope you'll turn this from a one shot into a story it'd be nice to see two rival gang members who obviously have a spark between them! LOVED IT as always! S
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