Reviews for A Triangle of Blue Material
IThoughtMYJokesWereBad chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
This is a brilliant poem. I almost cried while reading it. You have a knack for poetry, that much is for sure. I feel like this poem really captures how I felt about The Kite Runner. When Amir witnessed what Assef did to Hassan, I was urging him to stop it, at least give Hassan a chance to run. And when Hassan and Ali left, I was mentally begging Amir to go stop them, then I was so angry at him for not running out and stopping them. This poem really captures that. It's one of the best stories on here for The Kite Runner that I have read so far.

JOKES:)
TaylorS chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
I really liked this poem. It was written well for the book, with the key point of turn in the friendship of Amir and Hassan. You used really good imagery and it all just flowed together so well. Really nice job!