|Reviews for Two Worlds Len and Rin|
| ilovevocaloid93 chapter 1 . 8/28/2014
This one-shot needs more text. At least 1,000 words or more.
| LolCatsAreYummy chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
oh this was based on the song! i get it now!
| dragonroses chapter 1 . 10/5/2011
great job hope you keep it up
| Alexandria Kennedy chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
You have some grammatical errors in your story. Other than thought, I found this quite beautiful. Consider revising and editing it, though. There are only a few, simple mistakes, such as "here" instead of "hear". Those kind of errors. Anyway...Good story. Bye