Reviews for I'm Sorry Charlie
emirozus chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
AHHH I THINK I LOVE YOU

Anyways, I can't believe you're doubting yourself because you LIAR you are a very good writer. I have no idea what the frick this fandom is about, but it doesn't matter because this story still made me feel and I liked it very much.

The only problem is- hunny, you used desert instead of dessert for prompt number 12. I laughed. Don't worry about it.

This style of writing a story with it is very unique, unlike just 50 sentences. I liked how you managed to tell a story. And don't worry about the sentences being out of order. I liked how you tried at the beginning then just said well screw it.

Anyways, thanks so much for participating! This is a lovely story!

vanelo159

PS: Ahahah a second person has submitted! You are now in competition!