|Reviews for Witches Rangers and the 141|
| Opus chapter 28 . 3/3
Reviews when I send them seem to be 4 or more days late what's up with that?
| Ghost chapter 28 . 3/1
Huh I did not know about down the rabbit hole nor did I think south Liberion was indeed intact, I did google strike witches world map and what I saw was brazil the only land mass. I do not intierly know the history or more the Geograpy of the the SW World. I have taking te first thing I see WITH a grain of salt
| Guest chapter 28 . 3/1
please make james appeared now an save luchini because right now I am going to kill a bitch if luchini gets rape... I am not joking.
| Apsody243 chapter 28 . 3/1
Great Story, but damn man! How can you leave us on this kind of cliff hanger!
I mean I wont be able to rest until I know what happens to my favorite witch. Please for the love of all that is holy be merciful to the poor girl.
She of all people doesn't deserve such a horrendous fate.
| mypetgoat chapter 28 . 2/28
Aw, man! This is too much! CAN SOMEBODY HELP LUCCHINI?!
| Guest chapter 28 . 2/24
When I first saw that this had a new chapter I was thinking 'Yes this is going to be good!'. By the end I was thinking 'Oh god this is horrifying'. That last part was extremely hard for me to read. I am hoping that particular group responsible for it receive a swift and very brutal retribution for it. And for a bit of mood whiplash, I found the part with the WBC getting attacked with the fire hose to be utterly hilarious.
| GaryOkampo chapter 28 . 2/25
I applaud your courage to write such a scene. I truly hope that you can post the next chapter soon. I want to see that man, no monster to suffer.
| Amir-015 chapter 28 . 2/25
Alfred Pennyworth: With respect Master Wayne, perhaps this is a man that *you* don't fully understand, either. A long time ago, I was in Burma. My friends and I were working for the local government. They were trying to buy the loyalty of tribal leaders by bribing them with precious stones. But their caravans were being raided in a forest north of Rangoon by a bandit. So, we went looking for the stones. But in six months, we never met anybody who traded with him. One day, I saw a child playing with a ruby the size of a tangerine. The bandit had been throwing them away.
Bruce Wayne: So why steal them?
Alfred Pennyworth: Well, because he thought it was good sport. Because some men aren't looking for anything logical, like money. They can't be bought, bullied, reasoned, or negotiated with. Some men just want to watch the world burn.
| lolperson2 chapter 28 . 2/24
this story and another has inspired me to make my own strike witches and call of duty crossover
| MP5 chapter 28 . 2/24
Well then, that ending segment was very difficult to read. It stands to reason that the only retribution fit to befall Glazkov and his men at this point is to be strung upside down by their feet and then bled like pigs. I have to give you credit for being able to steel yourself enough to throw Lucchini through the wringer like this, because I certainly could never do that.
I also found rather interesting the interactions between the witches and the people of 'our' modern world. While the firehose part felt predictable and a bit over the top, I'm sure anyone who does not agree with the extremist views of the WBC have wanted to see them get their comeuppance for abusing their first amendment rights, and I think that was well-handled here.
| Mkoll chapter 28 . 2/24
So I'm waiting For James (and/or Shirley) to smash through the windows like Rambo(and/or Lara Croft) and gun them down with extreme diligence. Also I know that the Modern warfare series might have loose Views of reality, But I cant help but think there might be one or two Russians that think this is wrong.
| ChaosVector chapter 28 . 2/24
inb4 James saves Lucchini in the nick of time and she genuinely falls head over heels for him.
That's the only 'logical' and stereotypical outcome from saving a girl from something even more traumatic than she's already suffered. After a series of killing shots taking care of the Russians around him, Glazkov's neck finds itself broken? Maybe Glazkov's head suddenly finds itself with a bullet hole, perhaps several? Maybe a Spear of Impaling Barbed Death finds itself embed into his rotten heart? Oh wait, wrong series. If, by any chance, you have Ramirez save her AFTER they're done, it'd leave a really bad taste in my mouth to continue reading this fanfic, just sayin'...
Also, I see you're starting to abuse the power of cliffhangers... I like it! Keep up the good work.
| blaze92x45 chapter 28 . 2/24
Oh man dude I can't believe you left us off an that 0.0 jeez the base assualt was so intense with the inner circle coming out of no where and shooting the crap out of everyone then with mr beret getting his dirty hands onour poor little ensgin (shutters) anyway I liked what happened to the WBC in this chapter that made me laugh and the lemon scenes where rather well done explicit without being lewd so mission accomplished on that front. And as for Justice I feel bad for him his whole unit got wiped out by those "metal bastards" anyways I can't wait for the next chapter. Until next time.
| majoramiruddin chapter 28 . 2/24
Last part sick
Love the WBC's bath
| Shockeye7665 chapter 26 . 1/26
Neuroi in New York? Oh boy. I better hope that the US doesn't go for the whole "nukes will sort everything" solution. But of course, a Neuroi would probably destroy a B-52, B-1 or a B-2.
And could there be a potential appearance for Team Metal to appear alongside Ambush Squad and Minna, Mio, Eila and Sanya as they go and try to solve the problem of the Neuroi in New York? Because I mean, Team Metal just destroyed the Russian submarine, and they were airlifted out, so maybe, when the Neuroi came into New York, Team Metal might be retasked. And those two witches with the Army supply convoy might provide extra backup for Minna and her team.
Anyway, I've been following this story for a quite good while, and I'm hooked! The attention to detail is astounding and you are very good at adding details to characters that seem plain, like Roach for example.
Otherwise, no errors I can see, apart from literacy errors that are apparent across the story that there were too many to list.
So anyways, looking forward to the next chapter!