|Reviews for Ohana Onipa'a Touris Purr|
| amber.lincoln3 chapter 12 . 9/14/2013
| Joshua-Sinclair chapter 6 . 6/16/2011
Wow so nice to have Sky and her team join the party. My guess is that it is divergence time here.
| Joshua-Sinclair chapter 5 . 6/6/2011
Very nice fifth chapter! Just remember that if Mertle's abilities are known to Sky, she CANNOT use them on the planet due to anti-psionic interference caused by the artifacts in the ancient city.
| Joshua-Sinclair chapter 4 . 6/5/2011
I love this part! I can't wait to see how this story unfolds with your characters involved!
| Joshua-Sinclair chapter 3 . 5/15/2011
Very nice. Interesting new character this Sky. I'd like to see what this conflict she mentions is about.
| Joshua-Sinclair chapter 2 . 5/15/2011
So far so good. Well I own the OC's from Ohana Onipa'a Prime. OC's that this author brings into story, marking the divergence of Touris Purr from Ohana Onipa'a Prime are hers.
| Joshua-Sinclair chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Attention all readers: This author has full clearance from me to write her version of my series. There will be plenty of differences along the way, including new P.O.V.s for her OC's Enjoy!
I really like how you got this set up.I can't wait for new POVs to take affect.