|Reviews for A Cephirian Christmas|
| Nispedana chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Hi there! It is I! lololol. As you already know, It had been a decade (or more) since I watched this so I can only review other non-canon related stuff like writing style. Hehehe
Well, first, this story had been written a while back so I'm sure a lot has changed already. But I'll comment on what I saw, anyway, in case you'd need easy reference.
Well one, the tags can be diminished. You know the 'he said' 'she said' etc.
The tense problems were found only in the author's note and a very few parts of the story itself.
But I'd like to commend you on this story since your characterized them well enough for me to imagine them so vividly-despite not seeing them for years.
Good job and thanks for sharing
| Antoinette Veronica chapter 1 . 8/19/2012
Nice to see Zagato being friendly with the girls. Where is Lantis? Think Hikaru would love to see him!
But may I ask why you insert an OC so annoying? I wonder if there are anyone obnoxious in PERFECT Cephiro at all.
Umi is her usual self, very expressive.
This fic is cute and fun, keep it up!
| James Birdsong chapter 1 . 5/11/2011
Very much great.