Reviews for Dancing with the Dead
rayningnight chapter 1 . 7/24/2015
This made me very depressed. It's true though, as many fanfics mention, that Tsuna never would have been who he was without Reborn - the catalyst that brought mayhem and chaos and all that, yes, but it's better than the alternative "peace" (in death).

...I still have shivers remembering Hibari's death. Bones under the cherry blossoms...
It really is too bad for Tsuna. And the rest of the mafia underworld.

-Rayne
gnomeculture chapter 1 . 2/8/2015
Tch, Tch, Reborn in this fanfic should've realized that bloodshed would encounter Vongola every second, and Xanxus is a loner. He doesn't want children. So the Vongola line won't continue
Upupupupu chapter 1 . 12/28/2014
Hmmm, this is great. I like how all of Tsuna's Guardians, and Tsuna, died at the very end. Except Ryohei and Lambo.

Well, at least Ryohei had a somewhat happy ending, even though he'd probably be still unfulfiled. And Lambo would be growing up in an orphanage.

Then again, everything is Reborn's fault, lel.
The Royal Queen Akito chapter 1 . 2/15/2014
I love what if stories, and this one is just really beautifully written.
goddessa39 chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
Kinda like these. I mean, in the canon and usual things, Tsuna becomes Vongola or at least is somehow involved. Damn Reborn, you know. But couldn't Tsuna grow up to be something else? Even if it is a useless thing?
Isa Knightwalker chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
Haunting. Especially Hibari, Gokudera, and Yamamoto's parts. The ending was very sad too.
iluvfairytale chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
Hibari and Mokuro deaf!? NOOOOOOOO! poor Yamamoto-san too
Moon's Smile chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
Wow. Dark. Really dark and just heart-breaking. I think I'm gonna go cry.

But I need to review because I like this fic. Because it's dark and sad and probably what would have happened if Tsuna never was Vongola Decimo...yeah. Nice job. :)
Clams-and-Rainbows chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
WOAAAAAAAAAHH! Dark!

I love it, as it indeed might've been what would've happened if Tsuna never was to be Vongola tenth.

Thanks for this nice fic!
Erzazel chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Haha, I accidentally added this fic to my alerts.:P

Damn, I never really thought about what would life be for the Guardians if Tsuna was never tutored by Reborn. Now I want to read more fics like these...*shot*Xp. Pretty depressing, if your fic is anything to go by.

Thank you!
TripOverFlatSurfaces chapter 1 . 4/15/2012
Oh my. How dark. Sad thing is, I could totally see this happening if Tsuna never became the Tenth; or rather, never had the chance to become the Tenth. They all almost died in canon, and the only reason they didn't was because of Tsuna. And so since he didn't interfere, they died. I'm curious as to who the 3 people at the end were. I'm fairly sure one was Uni, but the "madman with bleached hair" and the "worthless street cleaner" are...?
Latui chapter 1 . 3/22/2012
"Just in case." *shivers* woah, that was awesome. Sad, but awesome.
LonelyDreamer7 chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
Ugh. I shudder at the thought of this actually happening. Things would of definitely been different for Tsuana and everyone else if Reborn hadn't of popped his cute little baby head into town.

Great story!
xXxShiniXKazexXx chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
Awesome~!
Primal Red chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
Heya! :3

This is quite the right way of seeing what would have happened had Tsuna not had become the Tenth and had it been too late. :D Indeed, I especially liked Gokudera and Kyoko's part (as dark as it is, it fits somehow), and the continuous deaths...it fits together nicely in a somewhat macabre way. Because had Tsuna not changed and not bothered to force himself to change, he would end up like this exactly.

Very nicely done, through and through. :)

Primal Red
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