|Reviews for If Today Was Your Last Day|
| Skye chapter 25 . 2/22
Update! Pretty please? Amazing writing!,
| The Final Shadow chapter 25 . 1/14
I was gonna review this series much much earlier. Seriously I was. But I have this thing where I have to catchup with absolutely everything within a story that has been written or done. Including sequals and or prequals. Suffice it to sy it took just over a month to get here, Reading it for a couple hours every day. So, review time.
I love the way that you have developed Lily into the whoniverse and the ways in which she interacts with the events and characters. My personal favourite being with Donna. All in all I thought that Lilly would have far too much power, however, you managed to pair her power off perfectly with appropriate consequences, the waythe Dark Phoenix is evolving now is fantastic.
I would like some more extra adventures in there, I just think that would be really awesome, and there are some random spelling mistakes at certain points. Other than that, however, this has fast become my favourite fic series on this site and I cant wait to read more.
| Gwilwillith chapter 25 . 1/8
| grapejuice101 chapter 25 . 1/7
I love it. I want more chaps asap
| Gwilwillith chapter 24 . 1/1
Great chapter, go Phoenix!
| blackcat711 chapter 24 . 12/31/2013
I agree about Matt getting jipped in his finale. I want Russell back.
| grapejuice101 chapter 24 . 12/30/2013
I love it. I am begging u, I need more chaps now
| HetaPastaH3ro chapter 24 . 12/30/2013
I am serious... you and my brother think just alike with the Christmas special. As far as the Silence go I am just not sure how to feel... I went all of season six just thinking that they were nothing but evil psychopathic villians, but it turns out that they are just genetically modified creatures that were basically doing their job. They were trying to help the doctor stay alive but just a little extreme about it... my head hurts. I think Moffat really just needed a longer time slot for this special. I think a lot of parts got cut that could have made for a better flowing ending to Matt Smith. What do you think? Seriously I need to talk to someone about this episode or the show in general... Also great job with these stories, Lily/Pheniox is the only OC I will put up with in this fandom. Thank you for writing a good OC, I think she is a good balance for the Doctor and doesn't overpower the storyline. Awesome Job!
| scgirl-317 chapter 23 . 12/24/2013
I have to admit that I'm not crazy about Rebel Flesh/Almost People, but I'll be interested in seeing how Lilly fits in. At the moment, however, I'm overcome with Matt Smith feels. *sniff*
| ValkyrieEverdeen12 chapter 23 . 12/22/2013
Hello! New reviewer here from rainy England :) I just wanted to drop a message to say how much I am loving your stories. Seriously. I read every single one of Lily's stories/saga/ballad/epic in two days. TWO DAYS! I just love her so much, she's so awesome, but vulnerable too. That makes a nice change actually, as I seem to be running out of good fanfiction to read (you know you're obsessed when that happens :/), and I keep seeing horrific Mary Sues who are uber cool and witty and powerful etc. with no flaws or anything. Urgghh they annoy me so much, like they just waltz in all perfect, and the main character swoons at them, whilst they flatter their eyelashes and deliver god awful lines. So, yeah, mini rant over, your story is awesome, and please do keep writing for all us readers! I may end up with withdrawal symptoms if I'm not careful...
I am sorry to hear that your attempts to own Doctor Who are failing... I seem to be having similar problems. Honestly, I write and write to the bbc, and not once have I received a reply. I am convinced that someone in the post office is conspiring against me and hiding the letters. It is the only explanation.
Oh, and just to prove how cool this story is, I would just like to point out that I am writing this frankly awesome review at 1:45am UK time.
| Gwilwillith chapter 23 . 12/22/2013
| Gwilwillith chapter 22 . 12/20/2013
| scgirl-317 chapter 22 . 12/20/2013
A nice piece of fluff! I have to admit, I'm curious about how you deal with the Silence taking Amy. I've always wondered when exactly they did it.
Nice work! I'm looking forward to where you take the rest of the season!
| grapejuice101 chapter 22 . 12/19/2013
omg I love this chap. I so cant wait for u to do the 50th episode. update
| Nikki Pond chapter 21 . 12/19/2013
Didn't you use to hate Matt back when you first write the Lily and the Doctor?