Reviews for The mystery of the Melrose Place stalker
baldgal chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
My first review was a little lame. My guess is that the mystery stalker is not on the usual suspects list. It's probably someone that has a connection to everyone or someone at the building and staying out of sight until the smoke clears and then will reveal him/herself.
baldgal chapter 2 . 6/30/2011
That was one big pool party! I sometimes wished Alison had taken a swing or gotten into a catfight with Amanda to show she's not a wimp and will stand her ground once in awhile.

Felt sorry for Sydney. She still cares about Jane even if it's not mutual. Hopefully Jane will come around this time?

You captured the characters very well. Looking forward to your next update!