Reviews for Half the Man
Beloved Daughter chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
Awesome story! I just wished there was a sequel! Thanks for writing and sharing this story with us!
BlackMarionette chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
I've always been curious about the relationship between Lu Ten and Zuko :) and this is very interesting! I can't wait for what's next.
Mega Pinethapple chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
i love this story please continue
xXxMartelxXx chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
*whispers* That's so cool. :O
gatogirl1 chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
This was a really nice piece. I like the exploration of the Lu Ten character (we know so little about him, that he makes a great blank slate for stories). I really like the way you've painted him as his father's son- his daring, his protection of family, his power (perhaps not yet as fully developed as Iroh, but in time, in time...) Thanks for writing!
Sulky Shadow chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
There definitely need to be more stories about what would be different if Lu Ten survived. Great story.
CrayonsPink chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
This was amazing. I loved it!
namjai chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
Fascinating AU. It really gives a sense of how Iroh's presence might have been some kind of restraining influence on Ozai - even if it was just the threat of the rightful heir still being around. And with Iroh out of the picture in this AU, things get exponentially worse, and you get that across in an effectively chilling way. All the same, I like that there's some glimmer of hope at the end that all is not necessarily lost. Your characterization of Lu Ten is great, too.
Lady Elizabeth of New York chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
Oh honey no. You have to write more. There are so few Lu Ten survives stories. I need more. Please write more. For your 21 reviewers.
Imperial Dragon chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
An interesting what-if. Will there be any more shorts involving this AU?
doodlechick12 chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
This is a very good story! I loved it!
Ocean's Nocturne of the COCA chapter 1 . 5/27/2011
Little Zuko is so cute! :) I can just imagine it...I like the way you characterized Lu Ten. The great person his cousin remembers, but still a Fire Nation prince.

Looking forward to more!
Gremlinite chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
I like this! Lu Ten may be 'half the man,' but at this point it seems like he may get twice the work done yet. :P Very creative. Thanks for sharing! I never would have thought of this alternative, but it's very compelling.
CalliopeMused chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
Lu Ten definitely doesn't get enough love, but you did a lot to help the guy out. His interactions with Zuko are my favorite part of this.
Lost to the Hoping chapter 1 . 5/16/2011
Oooh, that's actually pretty interesting!
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