|Reviews for A Shrinking World The Parallel Paths Remix|
| Lovina Rossi-Vargas chapter 1 . 4/9/2015
Definitely appropriate for Jack.
| goldacharmed chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
Such a cute idea to write about Rory's time as a Roman, and I love how Jack kept getting involved!
| WonderfulWhovian chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Good writing! This could actually have happened! Fills in the unknown 2,000 year space of Rory's life well!
| sydg813 chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
I really liked that, good job!
| Ravenpan chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
Wonderfully writ! I felt very lonely travelling through the ages with Rory, and I loved how it all turned out. I'm sad their friendship, since the memories are all jumbled, isn't. But it all turned out, and seeing Jack be a part of it was a privilidge :)
| LucidKren chapter 1 . 6/17/2011
This was a truly charming story: it was intelligent and so true to the characters. You write very well, and you told a tale that could very well have happened. Lovely!
| Rivana chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Great story! Finally someone puts the boy who waited and the man that cannot die on the same page. :) Only, now I'm frustrated because I want more, much more.
| JeMS7 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Jack's name is extremely appropriate actually. Very good writing, it had never dawned on me that they would have met, but the fact that he has been around just about as long makes a lot of sense.