This is the best mobward fanfiction that I have read

Chapter 41 review.
I would like to see more. This doesn’t feel as complete as it should.
Thank you for the ride.

Where was the dog during Victoria’s attacks?
Congratulations on your new job.
What the Hell is Leah’s deal?

I’m very surprised by how Charlie’s handling the Riley situation. Especially after what Bella went through with James. I’m really disappointed with him.
Bella needs to keep on her toes and listen to her gut about him. I don’t care if she’s worried about the firm’s reputation.

This was a difficult chapter to get through. I’m sorry that they lost their baby. I hope that Bella is able to get through this. Of course this may have been her breaking point.
I realized that this is only the 13th of 41 chapters. It looks like it may be a long road ahead of them.

Do I hear the potter-patter of little feet in their future?

UPDATE SOON...'

The one guest who is correcting all the grammar or spelling mistakes STOP IT YOU'RE ANNOYING. It doesn't make you smarter than anyone else to put out somebody's mistakes. Btw, the story is amazing, I wish we could have an epilogue.

10 years... 10 YEARS! I read this when you first wrote it and I have been eagerly waiting... Please come back!

You can’t arrest someone in their home without a warrant

Love It!
Can’t wait for the rest of the story.

Love this story we need a sequal

Oh how I wish you would post an epiloge and tell us what happened to Leah! Love this story.

"You're penthouse" YOU'RE is the contraction for YOU ARE. The possessive form is YOUR.

"She seemed genuine and that peaked my interest." It's PIQUED. Look it up if you don't believe me.