Reviews for The Heart of The Mafia
Iluvbeinarattler chapter 21 . 7/3/2019
when will Bella learn to stop going tho the restroom alone?
karlee.is.number.1 chapter 41 . 6/26/2019
Any update? This story is just so good.
bobbysgirl1976 chapter 41 . 6/20/2019
GREAT STORY! I READ IT WHEN IT WAS FIRST POSTED AND RE-READING IT YET AGAIN WISHES YOU'D COME BACK AND CONTINUE WITH THE SEQUEL. READ YOU SOON (hopefully)
Debbi84 chapter 41 . 1/29/2019
Love it!
Mona69 chapter 41 . 1/29/2019
I love it! Jacob got fucked
Guest chapter 41 . 1/29/2019
Now I must so this is the best story I've read lately, and I've read alot. This story tho has it all,drama,love,revenge, oh my God I love this, please keep writing your stories, I'll read them all cause your book has a beginning and a end most stories leave you hanging,trying to figure out the end or their other half to their story, sorry other writers, but I'll stick with this writer,I need a beginning and a end to a story, thanks,keep writing, love it!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/16/2019
Hey I'm liking this so far,I'm the type of reader who likes to read the whole story then give my review, but so far I'm impressed, I'm just a loacl person who likes to read, your going great keep at it!
Wicca2011 chapter 1 . 12/9/2018
O.m.g. I just go ode this and it was awesome! I loved it!
cutie123r chapter 13 . 10/6/2018
:(
cutie123r chapter 11 . 10/6/2018
So so cute!
cutie123r chapter 2 . 10/5/2018
Edward has got it bad!
cutie123r chapter 1 . 10/5/2018
“Second in command” hahaha!
PreciousLuv48 chapter 1 . 9/29/2018
it's always the people who only have negative things to say who make the story bad
Guest chapter 2 . 8/12/2018
WOW, Edward is seriously contradictive in chapter two. He's talking about protecting women and children and that his protectiveness must come from how his mother raised him. But yet he literally OWNS a fucking whore house! He acts all chivalrous for Bella but not a few seconds before that he was telling Lauran to go fuck men (to make him money).
Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2018
Bella having panic attacks, fainting, nightmares, and being an all around damsel over this situation with James is so over done. Most women wouldn't act this way. Cause we wear big girl panties! I mean seriously? Nightmares and fucking fainting? How childish.
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