Reviews for The Heart of The Mafia |
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![]() ![]() ![]() when will Bella learn to stop going tho the restroom alone? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Any update? This story is just so good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() GREAT STORY! I READ IT WHEN IT WAS FIRST POSTED AND RE-READING IT YET AGAIN WISHES YOU'D COME BACK AND CONTINUE WITH THE SEQUEL. READ YOU SOON (hopefully) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! Jacob got fucked |
![]() ![]() Now I must so this is the best story I've read lately, and I've read alot. This story tho has it all,drama,love,revenge, oh my God I love this, please keep writing your stories, I'll read them all cause your book has a beginning and a end most stories leave you hanging,trying to figure out the end or their other half to their story, sorry other writers, but I'll stick with this writer,I need a beginning and a end to a story, thanks,keep writing, love it! |
![]() ![]() Hey I'm liking this so far,I'm the type of reader who likes to read the whole story then give my review, but so far I'm impressed, I'm just a loacl person who likes to read, your going great keep at it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() O.m.g. I just go ode this and it was awesome! I loved it! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() So so cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Edward has got it bad! |
![]() ![]() ![]() “Second in command” hahaha! |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's always the people who only have negative things to say who make the story bad |
![]() ![]() WOW, Edward is seriously contradictive in chapter two. He's talking about protecting women and children and that his protectiveness must come from how his mother raised him. But yet he literally OWNS a fucking whore house! He acts all chivalrous for Bella but not a few seconds before that he was telling Lauran to go fuck men (to make him money). |
![]() ![]() Bella having panic attacks, fainting, nightmares, and being an all around damsel over this situation with James is so over done. Most women wouldn't act this way. Cause we wear big girl panties! I mean seriously? Nightmares and fucking fainting? How childish. |