Reviews for The Heart of The Mafia
Guest chapter 34 . 6/18/2021
She WIPED her tears, not WHIPPED. Gah!
Guest chapter 33 . 6/18/2021
"Anthony was currently at Esme's being dotted on" Unless Esme was drawing dots on Anthony with a marker, I suspect you mean he was being DOTED on. LOL.
Guest chapter 30 . 6/15/2021
PASTED is the last tense of PASTE. The family rushed PAST him, not PASTED.
Guest chapter 11 . 6/12/2021
"The exam itself was growling." OMG! Do you mean GRUELING?
Guest chapter 11 . 6/12/2021
"I whipped my cheeks drying my tears" I suspect she didn't whip her cheeks - LOL. She probably WIPED them, though.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2021
Why have you not written any more stories cos this one brilliant
Guest chapter 6 . 6/11/2021
"I don't have anything to compare him too" TOO means ONLY "very" or "also." The correct version is "I don't have anything to compare him TO."
Guest chapter 5 . 6/11/2021
"she couldn't have someone else's death on her conscious" It's CONSCIENCE. "Conscious" means "awake."
Funsizedwitch chapter 41 . 5/20/2021
I adore rereading this story. I always hope for an update but I understand how life can get in the way. If you ever feel the need to do an epilogue or finish the beauty that is this story, I’d be forever grateful. Thank you so much for sharing this with everyone.
Guest chapter 41 . 4/7/2021
Love this story
Kenyatta.harmon16 chapter 11 . 3/27/2021
Guest chapter 41 . 2/25/2021
Will this story be continued?
Kathy Bower chapter 41 . 2/10/2021
Please update and finish this story.
nbrian72 chapter 40 . 2/5/2021
Will you be continuing the story
Guest chapter 41 . 1/30/2021
Loved this story
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