Reviews for The Heart of The Mafia |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hi there. I know this story was finished over a year ago, but I just found it and read it. I think it was amazing and that you really should consider a sequel...i know I would defiantly read it. Amazing job. Markie |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bella is an annoying bitch and the sex is corny, could be better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an excellent place to end this story. However you really need the sequel to be about Dwyer and Ciaus. I greatly enjoyed your story and look forward to more soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I flove your story! I'm embarrassed to say I've read it sooo many times, I just love the sweet/hot perfect combo your E/B has. Beautiful lemon at the end of this chapter as always! Please please pretty please come back and write more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you. Come back soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Updat soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() HUH! I carried a watermelon... love it... great line from a great movie... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bella was right, if Edward sent her away that would be him hurting her. Well say, Bella, well say. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I believe a war is coming soon. This chapter really brings me to tear. Losing a baby gonna do a number on Bella. It's not good. Thanks so much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This cool mafia Edward really turned into a softie but I like him anyway. Love this stor so far. I've noticed that you haven't updated for quite a while. I really think that such a good story deserves an ending. Thanks so much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just found this story today. The first chapter is absolutely intriquing. Thanks so much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a good story. I wish you would consider finishing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story...when will it b updated or finished... |
![]() ![]() i have read this story twice and it is brilliant thought there might have been an update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this it? I see that you haven't updated in a year, yet this isn't marked complete. I hate to say that is this is the end...I am disappointed. What happened with Leah? Caius? Did Bella and her mother ever make up? There are just too many unanswered questions. You have to give us something...please! I am putting you on alert just in case. Thanks for the story...I hope you finish it. |