Reviews for The Heart of The Mafia
KhristenHartgrove chapter 2 . 5/8/2011
aww so he really likes her and dont just wanna fuck her, def wanna know what james did to her.
pmk kelly chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Looks like this story could be a good one looking forward to the nxt ch
clovergirl24 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
a great first chapter. i am already hooked. i love the way you are writing edward.
KhristenHartgrove chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
i am officially in loove with this story and cant wait to read and see what happend t bella Mobward is one of my favs!
MaryRoseFlourish chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
A promising start, I am looking forward to more :)
melissamary55 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
really good start update soon i cant wait to read what will happen next with bella and edward update soon
Tink8621 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Awesome first chapter can't wait for more!
ut aurum lautus per incendia chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Great start, can't wait until you update again.
pearl86 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
ohhh..its soo cute..really promising..cant wait for more:)
cunnew chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Really good start, Edward seems really caring and Bella has obviously been through a lot so I hope he will be good to her.
acw1 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Great first chapter. Well written. Looking forward to more of their story.
MyBabyBlues chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
This seems like a really good story. The first chapter was great!
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