Reviews for The Heart of The Mafia |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was a difficult chapter to get through. I’m sorry that they lost their baby. I hope that Bella is able to get through this. Of course this may have been her breaking point. I realized that this is only the 13th of 41 chapters. It looks like it may be a long road ahead of them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Do I hear the potter-patter of little feet in their future? |
![]() ![]() ![]() UPDATE SOON...' |
![]() ![]() ![]() The one guest who is correcting all the grammar or spelling mistakes STOP IT YOU'RE ANNOYING. It doesn't make you smarter than anyone else to put out somebody's mistakes. Btw, the story is amazing, I wish we could have an epilogue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 10 years... 10 YEARS! I read this when you first wrote it and I have been eagerly waiting... Please come back! |
![]() ![]() You can’t arrest someone in their home without a warrant |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love It! Can’t wait for the rest of the story. |
![]() ![]() Love this story we need a sequal |
![]() ![]() Oh how I wish you would post an epiloge and tell us what happened to Leah! Love this story. |
![]() ![]() "You're penthouse" YOU'RE is the contraction for YOU ARE. The possessive form is YOUR. |
![]() ![]() "She seemed genuine and that peaked my interest." It's PIQUED. Look it up if you don't believe me. |
![]() ![]() She WIPED her tears, not WHIPPED. Gah! |
![]() ![]() "Anthony was currently at Esme's being dotted on" Unless Esme was drawing dots on Anthony with a marker, I suspect you mean he was being DOTED on. LOL. |
![]() ![]() PASTED is the last tense of PASTE. The family rushed PAST him, not PASTED. |
![]() ![]() "The exam itself was growling." OMG! Do you mean GRUELING? |