Reviews for The Heart of The Mafia
sue1zide chapter 13 . 6/1/2022
This was a difficult chapter to get through. I’m sorry that they lost their baby. I hope that Bella is able to get through this. Of course this may have been her breaking point.
I realized that this is only the 13th of 41 chapters. It looks like it may be a long road ahead of them.
sue1zide chapter 10 . 5/31/2022
Do I hear the potter-patter of little feet in their future?
kenyatta.harmon0516 chapter 13 . 4/21/2022
UPDATE SOON...'
sollpz.1305 chapter 1 . 1/15/2022
The one guest who is correcting all the grammar or spelling mistakes STOP IT YOU'RE ANNOYING. It doesn't make you smarter than anyone else to put out somebody's mistakes. Btw, the story is amazing, I wish we could have an epilogue.
L-Anne Cullen chapter 41 . 1/13/2022
10 years... 10 YEARS! I read this when you first wrote it and I have been eagerly waiting... Please come back!
Anon chapter 36 . 12/16/2021
You can’t arrest someone in their home without a warrant
EnglishBookLover chapter 41 . 9/28/2021
Love It!
Can’t wait for the rest of the story.
Guest chapter 41 . 9/18/2021
Love this story we need a sequal
Guest chapter 41 . 7/30/2021
Oh how I wish you would post an epiloge and tell us what happened to Leah! Love this story.
Guest chapter 38 . 6/18/2021
"You're penthouse" YOU'RE is the contraction for YOU ARE. The possessive form is YOUR.
Guest chapter 35 . 6/18/2021
"She seemed genuine and that peaked my interest." It's PIQUED. Look it up if you don't believe me.
Guest chapter 34 . 6/18/2021
She WIPED her tears, not WHIPPED. Gah!
Guest chapter 33 . 6/18/2021
"Anthony was currently at Esme's being dotted on" Unless Esme was drawing dots on Anthony with a marker, I suspect you mean he was being DOTED on. LOL.
Guest chapter 30 . 6/15/2021
PASTED is the last tense of PASTE. The family rushed PAST him, not PASTED.
Guest chapter 11 . 6/12/2021
"The exam itself was growling." OMG! Do you mean GRUELING?
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