Reviews for The Heart of The Mafia
Guest chapter 11 . 6/12/2021
"I whipped my cheeks drying my tears" I suspect she didn't whip her cheeks - LOL. She probably WIPED them, though.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/12/2021
Why have you not written any more stories cos this one brilliant
Guest chapter 6 . 6/11/2021
"I don't have anything to compare him too" TOO means ONLY "very" or "also." The correct version is "I don't have anything to compare him TO."
Guest chapter 5 . 6/11/2021
"she couldn't have someone else's death on her conscious" It's CONSCIENCE. "Conscious" means "awake."
Funsizedwitch chapter 41 . 5/20/2021
I adore rereading this story. I always hope for an update but I understand how life can get in the way. If you ever feel the need to do an epilogue or finish the beauty that is this story, I’d be forever grateful. Thank you so much for sharing this with everyone.
Guest chapter 41 . 4/7/2021
Love this story
kenyatta.harmon0516 chapter 11 . 3/27/2021
UPDATE PLEASE ...L
Guest chapter 41 . 2/25/2021
Will this story be continued?
Kathy Bower chapter 41 . 2/10/2021
Please update and finish this story.
nbrian72 chapter 40 . 2/5/2021
Will you be continuing the story
Guest chapter 41 . 1/30/2021
Loved this story
ClaceLover08 chapter 40 . 1/17/2021
i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i am happy that Bella & Edward are Married & i am happy that Bella & Edward have a Beautiful Baby Boy
kenyatta.harmon0516 chapter 41 . 12/17/2020
UPDATE
kenyatta.harmon0516 chapter 2 . 12/17/2020
Great Start.

Please update I need more. Don't start a Amazing Story like this if you've not going to finish it. It's torture not knowing what happens next
SassYNoleS chapter 41 . 10/31/2020
I do hope you update this story .. I know it's been a few years, but it's so good and I would love to read the ending of it !

Thanks for sharing what you have so far :)
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