Reviews for The Heart of The Mafia |
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![]() ![]() "I whipped my cheeks drying my tears" I suspect she didn't whip her cheeks - LOL. She probably WIPED them, though. |
![]() ![]() Why have you not written any more stories cos this one brilliant |
![]() ![]() "I don't have anything to compare him too" TOO means ONLY "very" or "also." The correct version is "I don't have anything to compare him TO." |
![]() ![]() "she couldn't have someone else's death on her conscious" It's CONSCIENCE. "Conscious" means "awake." |
![]() ![]() ![]() I adore rereading this story. I always hope for an update but I understand how life can get in the way. If you ever feel the need to do an epilogue or finish the beauty that is this story, I’d be forever grateful. Thank you so much for sharing this with everyone. |
![]() ![]() Love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() UPDATE PLEASE ...L |
![]() ![]() Will this story be continued? |
![]() ![]() Please update and finish this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Will you be continuing the story |
![]() ![]() Loved this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this story it is awesome and I love this series :) & i am happy that Bella & Edward are Married & i am happy that Bella & Edward have a Beautiful Baby Boy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great Start. Please update I need more. Don't start a Amazing Story like this if you've not going to finish it. It's torture not knowing what happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do hope you update this story .. I know it's been a few years, but it's so good and I would love to read the ending of it ! Thanks for sharing what you have so far :) |