Reviews for The Heart of The Mafia
MCBill99 chapter 10 . 7/13/2020
Why do you have Edward switching back and forth between calla Bella his wife and his fiancée?
MCBill99 chapter 10 . 7/13/2020
I can’t help but winder if Charlotte is up to no good.
VampBabies16 chapter 1 . 7/10/2020
Just finished the chapter can’t wait for more
Kenyatta.harmon16 chapter 1 . 7/10/2020
LOVE THIS
Guest chapter 40 . 7/10/2020
IGNORE THAT STUPID GUEST REVIEWER GOD COULD THEY BE ANY MORE RUDE
Guest chapter 41 . 7/10/2020
PLEASE FINISH THIS IS AWESOME
detsinbaby chapter 41 . 5/30/2020
Please finish.
Guest chapter 41 . 5/4/2020
Love love love this! You are amazing.
Guest chapter 41 . 2/26/2020
I see the freakin grammar police is at it again. Just enjoy the story like everyone else and shut the hell up about the spelling not being perfect. Trying to make yourself look smart by pointing out others mistakes only make you look petty and small. Grow up.
Frankie09 chapter 41 . 2/14/2020
at the endbut overall intense story- Kept me reading
Guest chapter 38 . 12/21/2019
"You're penthouse" Geez. "You are penthouse"? Seriously?
Guest chapter 35 . 12/21/2019
Bones were BREAKING, not BRAKING. ("Braking" is what a car does when it slows.)
Guest chapter 33 . 12/21/2019
The drug is HEROIN. A female hero is a HEROINE. LOL
Guest chapter 33 . 12/20/2019
"being dotted on like the baby he was" Egad! It's DOTED ON.
Guest chapter 32 . 12/20/2019
Uh, it's a "battle SCAR," not a "battle SCARE." Proofread much?
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