| Reviews for The Heart of The Mafia |
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  Guest chapter 40 . 7/10/2020 IGNORE THAT STUPID GUEST REVIEWER GOD COULD THEY BE ANY MORE RUDE |
| Guest chapter 41 . 7/10/2020 PLEASE FINISH THIS IS AWESOME |
 detsinbaby chapter 41 . 5/30/2020 Please finish. |
| Guest chapter 41 . 5/4/2020 Love love love this! You are amazing. |
| Guest chapter 41 . 2/26/2020 I see the freakin grammar police is at it again. Just enjoy the story like everyone else and shut the hell up about the spelling not being perfect. Trying to make yourself look smart by pointing out others mistakes only make you look petty and small. Grow up. |
| Frankie09 chapter 41 . 2/14/2020 at the endbut overall intense story- Kept me reading |
| Guest chapter 38 . 12/21/2019 "You're penthouse" Geez. "You are penthouse"? Seriously? |
| Guest chapter 35 . 12/21/2019 Bones were BREAKING, not BRAKING. ("Braking" is what a car does when it slows.) |
| Guest chapter 33 . 12/21/2019 The drug is HEROIN. A female hero is a HEROINE. LOL |
| Guest chapter 33 . 12/20/2019 "being dotted on like the baby he was" Egad! It's DOTED ON. |
| Guest chapter 32 . 12/20/2019 Uh, it's a "battle SCAR," not a "battle SCARE." Proofread much? |
| Guest chapter 30 . 12/20/2019 Lord. They rushed PAST him, not PASTED or PASSED. |
| Guest chapter 29 . 12/20/2019 "you're eleven o'clock is here" YOU'RE is the contraction for YOU ARE. You should've used YOUR, which is a possessive pronoun (your friends, your books, your house, etc.). |
| Guest chapter 28 . 12/20/2019 It's "Literally out of NOWHERE," not "KNOW WHERE." LOL |
| Guest chapter 24 . 12/19/2019 It's not "high jacked," it's "hijacked." LOL It's not "all the sudden," it's ALL OF A SUDDEN. "You're choice" YOU'RE is the contraction for YOU ARE. It's "gun TOTING," not "gun totting." |